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By : Elli
  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2008
    OOO Nice but that Skura and TenTen moment could have been longer and more hornyer... ya like ruff stuff is more to my likeing!!~
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  • From TheTimes on April 07, 2008
    I enjoyed this chapter,it was a new twist for me, I also loved the hinted Neji and Tenten(more please).
    Looking foward to the next chap. Thank you.
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  • From littlesasukekun on April 02, 2008
    So far i have only read the first chapter of your story.
    But let me say, It was sexy =3
    Great story, very ...detailed. hahah
    Ja ne
    -Sakura himi
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  • From ANON - Noc and NC on March 26, 2008
    Another great chapter!! This is one of the very, very few stories on this site that has kept my fill attention through the whole thing, I must say. Usually I just skim through it for the good parts, if ya know what I mean. Plot is a wonderful thing, and I'm always ever so pleased when I can turn to my friends and say something like, "So I read this really awesome story on AFF.net, and...". They all know when I say 'awesome story' I mean one with plot and good grammar and the whole shebang, because I don't talk about stories that don't have those things. I just love their faces whenever lil' ol' me gives proof to reading stories that are more likely then not of a dirty substance.

    I love Sakura's display of her shy side and the meek questioning she gave to Sasuke. The engagement was a daring thing to throw in on short notice, but a spectacular author like ye self shall have no problem pulling it off. Sakura's happy thoughts at the end of Sasuke being her boyfriend was very bitter-sweet, since that really isn't the truth at all, now is it? Poor girl! But Sasuke seems to be unable to care less about the engagement so maybe...!

    As quoted by Inner Sakura Haruno herself in episode three, love prevails!!
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  • From ANON - Noc and NC on March 26, 2008
    "A loud groan came from who she guessed was Sasuke, unless another man with an equally sexy voice had come into the room without her noticing"

    I just really liked that sentence :P.

    Another fantastic chapter that is once again very SEXY. Sakura's observation of herself in the mirror undoubtedly came from Sasuke's 'I wish you could see yourself', huh? It was a great start to the chapter and Sasuke's sudden arrival to catch her crouching down in her lingerie was a perfectly timed moment as well. Cliché done right!

    The sex was as hot as ever, and the slightly unexpected tenderness from Sasuke was a nice touch, letting us know he cares for the girl's physical well-being, at the least. He's in it for the sex for now, but I can only hope he becomes more then just interested in her personality and really starts to love it. Sakura's take on the whole thing was great as well, and you perfectly described her inability to comprehend the intense sensations she was experiencing. Not being able to tell pain from pleasure is quite a befuddling thing, lemme say it.

    Well actually, for me it was not being able to tell scalding hot from freezing cold, but shove your hand in boiling water when your pickling something and you'll see the similarities, I promise.

    Pulling back to the original topic, the ending with Sasuke lulling Sakura to sleep and forcing himself to keep his hands off her at the same time was a sort of sweet one, but I can't help but ponder on when exactly her parents are coming home and whether or not they check in on their daughter's room frequently...
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  • From ANON - Noc and NC on March 26, 2008
    You know what? I love it.

    For not having Het. as your forte, this is really good. Its crazy hot, of course, but the 'who' and 'how' and 'why' are very nicely laid out, and although this is said to be PWP, it looks to be an interesting little AU story. You actually kept Sakura's proportions in check, as many writers tend to NOT do and added in her usual personality from the series with her being something of a nerd. Of course in this more 'real life' sort of setting pink hair could defiantly be considered obnoxious, so that point was nice too. The descriptions were perfect, not repeating certain words or actions continuously and so it was not vulgar but sexy.

    Sasuke's lack of explanation to Sakura as to why he's suddenly ravishing her in an abandoned library section felt spot on with his character to me. Another great detail you had was that he and Sakura do not have limitless stamina, as their both spent from their small share (or maybe rather large share for Sakura, but us girls are lucky like that) of orgasms.

    The Naruto bit at the end was also very funny :D!
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  • From ANON - Velida on March 23, 2008
    Fucking hot. So bloody amazingly hot. Please keep writing more! I kinda like how Sasuke's already engaged and Sakura doesn't know--ANGST! Man, is he good in bed, or is he good in bed?! He's one hot piece of ass.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2008
    its alrght but I would like it if Sakura was more vixen then kitten. Like she be more than a just a quivering mess and that Sasuke can be the one who just cant be in control.~
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  • From ANON - wishful on March 23, 2008
    Hawt. Absolutely hawt, with some rough sex that is hawt hawt hawt.

    I'm going to have to recommend NO on the M/M. There's already soooo goddamn much M/M in the Naruto fandom, that it's hard for we het-shippers to get anything to get our rocks off on. So say no to the M/M, and give us some more crazy hawt Sakura!Sasuke!omg!fucking action.

    Some Jealous!Sasuke might be nice too, since I'm sure there are some other guys into Sakura... and she might be kind to them, especially after she finds out about Sasuke's girlfriend. Or, an even bigger twist of IRONY, would be to make Sasuke's fiance a dyke (like Anko lol) who tries to steal Sakura (haha, so I'm meeting you halfway here - no M/M, but some F/F is ok).

    And Jealous!Sasuke leads to Rough!Rough!Sex, yeah?
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  • From butterdansel on March 22, 2008
    I'll be honest, I don't want M/M. I love the fanfic, though. It's great on it's own, it doesn't have to throw in a threesome or yaoi, for me to enjoy it. XD But whatever floats your boat!
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  • From promise2003 on March 22, 2008
    I definitely wouldn't mind a little bit of side yaoi, but I've noticed that most of the fans of SasuSaku are a little on the anti-gay side XD

    I would adore it if you added Naruto into their little fold. And I think that the whole arranged marriage thing will add in some wonderful drama for laterr chapters.
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  • From ANON - anon on March 21, 2008
    Amazing. Seriously, Sasusaku makes the best het smut. More to come maybe?
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  • From moderndayportia on March 21, 2008
    wow you are amazing at this
    I cant wait for the next update
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  • From ANON - NeeN on March 20, 2008
    omg, I loovvee ittt, but no threesomes with sakura, it just wouldn't fit right.
    but still AMAZZZINGGG CHAPPYYY!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - NeeN on March 20, 2008
    omg love it moree!!!!!!!!!!!
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