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By : Lyndsay
  • From venia on May 01, 2008
    *_____* wahhh more, please!! ^_^ Very nice story I hope you continue it!*curious to see next*
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  • From crazychemgeek on April 13, 2008
    I absolutely love this fic. I'm so not usually into the whole SasuNaruSaku stuff, but you write it so well that I'm just so keen to see where this goes!
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  • From charmpit on April 13, 2008
    Naruto and Sakura aren't sharing Sasuke; Sasuke and Sakura are sharing Naruto. Does Sakura understand this, or is she still too preoccupied with making her fantasies about her and Sasuke come to pass?

    I look forward to reading future chapters.
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  • From riddlestar on April 13, 2008
    i am totally addicted to your brilliant fic! keep up the awesome work and just ignore the sakura haters.. :D
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  • From snnj11220 on April 05, 2008
    Loved this chapter, looking forward to the next one!
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  • From ANON - B_L_A_H on March 25, 2008
    I loved the first chapter, even though I kinda twitched at the Sakura bit.. and figured from then on you were gonna involve her somehow.. and I thought I could keep reading this story, coz it seemed really good, and just skip the Sakura bits.. but I can't, I just despise NaruSaku THAT much, and even though I hate her, that's not why I dislike her in this story. It seems like this should be just a straight NaruSasu story, with how much Naruto loves Sasuke, and when you threw in Sakura, particuly NARUSaku.. you killed it. You cheapened the story so much, it ain't funny. =/ I mean, why? Yeah, I could understand why he didn't want Sasuke in trouble, and that's why he asked her to keep going out with him.. but put NaruSaku, and you turn Naruto into a bastard, who seems like he doesn't even care bout Sasuke anymore, even though Sasuke knows about this turn.

    Sorries, still a good story, though I wouldn't say plot wise, but you.. no, sorry, can't do it. I think that I don't even think this is a good story anymore, coz I hate it when people throw in stuff like this.. (Once again, it's not cause I hate Sakura, lol.)

    Good wording, and a nice flow though. Could of had a lot more potential.
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  • From crazychemgeek on March 23, 2008
    I love it! And I'm not usually into these kinda fics, but the way Naruto dealt with Sakura was hot, and I can't wait to see what happens when she goes over to his house with Sasuke! Please update soon...
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  • From ANON - Davey Lockhart on March 22, 2008
    Pretty damn hot, yeah.
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  • From serenagold on March 22, 2008
    hehehe =^^=

    Sasuke's going to have to learn to like it with Sakura if he's going to agree to indulging in hot sexy threesomes. Since he's going to be sandwiched in the middle anyway, maybe he can convince Sakura to take it from behind so atleast he can pretend he's with another man? I dunno, but whatever the solution, I'm looking forward to see where its all going! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - AAAHHHHHH on March 21, 2008
    Your chapter 1 was great, really, the fact that i like it as much as I did even with Sakura shows how great but Do you realize how many fics have been ruin (for me, atleast) or I've lost interested in because of Sakura?

    I don't know why, seriously, I just don't like the girl, I have never dislike someone so much- any character from any show- and I have no problem with any pairing (and I have seen a few really weird ones) but not her not even with Ino.
    For the authors (now including you) I really like I usually keep reading and try to scim over the sakura parts but I'm guessing that's going to be hard if there's an actual threesome.
    I'm Sorry, everything else is really good.


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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on March 21, 2008
    The NaruSasu was definitely hot, my ultimate favorite pairing. Well-written and very well put together. The NaruSaku thing though...not so good. Makes me less enthusiastic.
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  • From roelyrodriguez1 on March 06, 2008
    wow! hot!

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  • From ElfenDream on March 06, 2008
    *droooools* Next please!!!! omg! that was toooooo hot.. mhm!
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  • From ANON - B_L_A_H on March 06, 2008
    I love this story, and how Naruto took the lead and is trying to make it more meaniful.. but Sakura (No, I don't hate her, but she does bug me sometimes, lol) really pissed me off in this story.. xD HER boys?? Geez! Please don't make this a threesome.. (No, I have nothing against threesomes, lol! Like I said, I just love the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke in this story, and Sakura is like.. an obsessive pervert..)
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  • From Mignonne422 on March 06, 2008
    This was wonderful, sweetie!

    Really, just fantastic and sweet and sexy and so ridiculously hot! God those two could melt steel, they're so HOT!! *drool*
    Even Sakura recognizes that XD

    The broken rules were just such a perfect touch. It really conveyed the emotion and meaning you were trying to pack behind it. Naruto wants things to change between them and is showing initiative. And gods, Sasuke doesn't even realize he's in love with him yet. Or maybe he does and is just in denial about it. That boy sure can do denial like a champ.

    And then there's Sakura. With one, but attracted to both. And gods, after watching them together, she's gonna be salivating for them both. I love the triangle you've set up. I'm very curious to see how you resolve it. It has the hint of a threesome flavoring, but you categorized it as male/male so I'm incredibly curious and excited for this.

    Great job! Five stars for you! *****
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