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Reviews for The Art of Deception

By : yaoiismyantidrug
  • From ANON - yaoiismy on September 08, 2014
    becca, this is yaoiismy. I can't remember my login information, and I don't have a way to reply directly to you.

    I'd love it if you were to write a continuation of this fic! Let me know if you do, and I'd love a link to it so that I can read it. And if I can remember my login info, I can link to it in the fic. I'm so glad you liked it, and I hope you do write a followup!
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  • From ANON - becca on August 30, 2014
    i want so badly to write another chapter to this, one where sasuke tries to play things off and kakashi doesn't wana burst sasuke's bubble and tries to deny nicely and sasuke gets all desperate... im not sure, would it offend you? or did you even plan to continue this?
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  • From ANON - Marcella on May 06, 2012
    Well I must admit my dissapointment in the end of the story not even speaking about lower-half of this story. You can do better my love, I know that.10 000+ words and no anal?! Are in hell or something...
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  • From mabidiso on March 23, 2012
    Love how you describe their perceptions and understandings. That phrase underneath the underneath is so overused, but damn is it ever descriptive. You capture all of the multiple layers of meaning and action happening simultaneously so very well.
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  • From ShinobiGoneWild on December 22, 2008
    Gah! I'm so behind in leaving these reviews, I suck!! But anyways, to be absolutely 100% brutally honest this is my favorite kakashi/sasuke story I have ever read, and trust me I've scoured the internet like an addict. It was beautifully detailed and really went in depth to what both of them were thinking, and I love that. Stories biased toward just one character's mind don't paint the entire picture for me, but this one did! Reading about how Sasuke is determined to hide his virginity and Kakashi having his doubts but going along with it anyway just gave the whole thing so much more meaning and not just sound like a pwp. I'm absoultely smitten with the fact that through it all Sasuke still remains a virgin because it makes Kakashi not sound like such a sleazebag =P. Plus, I'm a real sucker for endings like that as well so the whole thing was perfect to my eyes.

    Um...I have a problem with taking up space, but I'm working on it, haha! ;P
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  • From Camui on July 21, 2008
    I'm going to draw a fanart of this. e_e Can't help it. Cross-dressing Sasuke is oh-so-yummy.
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  • From on July 03, 2008
    That was a really good story. I like how you're able to portray such emotions and keep the characters in check. *.* You're a really great writer!
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  • From ANON - NeuroticNut on June 19, 2008
    Awww... but Kakashi, you never had trouble with virgins before!

    Hahaha, lovely.
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  • From hsosborne on May 15, 2008
    Much coolness. can't wait til you have another fic out. btw next time you add to The Lucky Ones, can you send me an email with the web address to let me know? My email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - NiteNite on April 24, 2008
    You...Are...God when it comes to writing Kakashi/Sasuke! *Swoons* Damn your stories are hot and they freakin rock!
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  • From ANON - grinsekatze on April 14, 2008
    great. why aren't there hundreds of reviews telling you that? but you got me wondering how this would go on. but the end sounded rather final so my hopes for a sequel are in vain I guess?

    much love to my very favourite KakaSasu authoress!
    grinsekatze (aka cheshirecat^^)
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 05, 2008
    Excellent job. You did a beautiful job portraying Sasuke as an inexperienced yet curious virgin wanting to please and find out information. I think that its' wonderfully creative of you to put him in a situation where he is an inexperienced youth instead of some sort of overly experienced sexually active teenager. Nice job on Kakashi's character as well. His thought process fit completely to how he's portrayed in the anime as well as the manga. Excellent job over all.
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  • From HannaFO on March 05, 2008
    Very,very hot :D
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  • From ANON - Elfendream on March 05, 2008
    wow! this was sooo steamy hot! my boyfriend started laughing coz my face suddenly got so red. lol.. my gods.. I`ll never read one of your fics in front of him ever again.pleeeeeaseeee say that there will be more chappies. You can`t let sasukes tight virgin ass, stay a virgin ass.
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  • From on March 05, 2008
    I enjoyed reading this. The detail in this fic was perfect; it described what was happening without taking away from the actual story. The ending wasn't what I was suspecting but I loved it. It made everything more realistic.

    Oddly enough about halfway through I kept thinking about 'Panties?' Having that in my head while reading this....

    Well lets just say I'm surprised my husband didn't come home from work this morning and find me passed out on the floor underneath my computer.

    Thanks so much for sharing this fic.

    cai
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