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Reviews for More Than Just a Kiss (edited)

By : Yuukichan
  • From hisoka on May 07, 2008
    thats really sucks, for them to finally get together then he just leaves...damn talk about exit stage left,with a bang.and sakura even if she doesnt know how close they are who would be so full of them selves to ask no tell someone else to get someone, for them, so prissy doesnt or cant get her hands dirty.well hope you can update soon and hope its longer next time too
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  • From Jan on May 06, 2008
    Wow! I loved it! I can't wait for the second part! Loved the way you took things that happen in the manga and in you unique way made it to fit you story perfectly!

    If there's a way to notified me when you've posted the second part, I would appreciate it^_^

    Jan

    naiomi2nailyn@yahoo.com
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  • From hisoka on April 24, 2008
    aww...hopefully he does remember his promise.i really do hope you continue this even though i cant always review because my computers crap and the other ones a secret i do always read them when i first see them, so i hope you continue much support
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  • From Bookworm51485 on April 23, 2008
    I've enjoyed this story so far, I do think your a good writer. I didn't like the switch up that you did. You've put the pairing as SasuNaru for every chapter then in the lemon you switch it to NaruSasu. Honestly, I wouldn't have read the story if it had been listed as a NaruSasu because I think Sasuke as a bottom is unrealistic, especially the way he is early in the story (I stopped reading the manga not too long after Shippudden started so I'm not too familiar with what's happening now). So I wasn't thrilled with that switch, felt a bit misled. But I do think your a good writer and the story is well written, so you should definitely continue. I hope you don't take my negative comments badly, it's really more of a personal preference than an actual problem with the story.
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  • From ANON - DARKON on April 23, 2008
    I am really enjoying this fic. The story is excelent so far. It follows the story line with more enteraction
    between Sasuke and Naruto. I am glad that they finaly got together.

    I really hope you continue this fic. I am interested in finding out what Naruto's reaction of Sasuke leaving
    after they finally took their relationship to the next step.

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

    DARKON
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  • From LadyRonin on April 23, 2008
    this is a really nice storyand i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From hisoka on April 20, 2008
    its cute how they want to protect eachother in the opposite ways.protect from a distance protect from your side,protect with your heart protect with your hands.i just hope naruto will keep to what he says and sasuke will come for him when hes ready(witch seems to be very soon seeing as hes calling him his boyfriend).hope you can update soon
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  • From spoon10488 on April 12, 2008
    Awesome chapter. Poor sasuke so lost in his revenge. Poor Naruto, a love not returned. So very sad and yet it makes this story all the better. I'm still hoping for a happy ending though.
    =)
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on April 07, 2008
    *nods* Good chapie, I like how your writing this. One thing I'd like to know though, is Sasuke going to betray the village and nearly kill naruto like in the manga? Biger question is, why is he nearly going to kill him?
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  • From hisoka on April 01, 2008
    im kinda glad he isnt mad at naruto for for leaving.hope you can update soon
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  • From spoon10488 on March 26, 2008
    Awesome story! I just read all four chapters now. I love your version of the Naruto story line. Can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From hisoka on March 25, 2008
    when did sasuke start calling him his boyfriend?he must not have noticed or just doesnt care to think about it. theyve gotten even closer,hope you can update soon
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  • From basilika on March 24, 2008
    it has a very nice, clam feeling about it. i'd love to read more.
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  • From solitare1 on March 24, 2008
    I think this is what the show would be like if it were made for adults. Good job.
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  • From LadyLaran on March 24, 2008
    I love the pacing. It's not moving too fast, which makes it very enjoyable. I hate romances that are on speed. It's like they're rushing through the important stuff simply to hit the lemons.
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