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Reviews for More Than Just a Kiss (edited)

By : Yuukichan
  • From ANON - Lanie12777 on March 10, 2008
    Hey, this chapter definitely was not disappointing, and now the story is starting to really pick up(you're following the anime perfectly in the beginning, there are so many stories that deviate from the anime and manga, it's good to read one that sticks close to both). Looking forward to more!^_^
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  • From lexjamandme on March 09, 2008
    Sometimes I just want to grab Sasuke and shake him. Grrr... for a genius he sure is stupid.
    And that is probably a huge compliment to you. You have portrayal Sasuke perfectly.
    I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 09, 2008
    Nice job. I'm glad that you made this into a story of substance and quality, despite the face that you could have taken the short cut and simply made it a oneshot about the accidental kiss that happened in the first episode of the anime.
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  • From KyuubiKit on March 06, 2008
    will there be a part II?

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  • From Meadhbh on March 05, 2008
    Hmm. This is quite intriguing. I do adore this pairing, but I must say that I'm rather glad Naruto responded the way he did. Yes, those two belong together, but Sasuke needs to be able to accept Naruto for who he is, not who he wants him to be--I don't blame him for trying to make Naruto stronger, which I'm sure he thought he was doing, but Naruto is never going to be quiet, repressed, and intensely focussed. He's loud and emotional--and already intensely focussed. So... yeah. I'm really curious to see where you're going to take this, and what the boys are going to have to go through to be together. (Please tell me they will be together in the end!)
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  • From katsuyo on March 05, 2008
    that was a little sad but a great first chapter. Keep up the great work. :D
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  • From mls on March 05, 2008
    loved it!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lanie12777 on March 05, 2008
    Just wanted to say I love your story, the plot is good, and your writing is excellent. Can't wait for the next chapter!^_^
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  • From lexjamandme on March 04, 2008
    Oh my god... that was the best thing I have read in a really long time. I cannot wait for more. I was holding my breath toward the end... when that happens, I know it's an awesome story. I hope this review feeds the creative juices...
    Until the next.
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on March 04, 2008
    WHAT?! Yoour must make a sequel it was just atrting to get interesting! I loved it :)
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  • From ANON - animelover on March 04, 2008
    yep, that just gave me chills .. especially that last sentence whispered by sasuke. geez, there are times i seriously hate him and then there's fics like this where i kinda think he's okay. this almost could be a oneshot but since TBC is listed, i'm guessing it's going to be a multichapter story, right?

    well then, let the games begin!
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  • From zimcrazed on March 04, 2008
    awe, Naruto can do better! He shouldn't have to change to be with someone! Ooooh, and what exactly is Sasuke planning? Can't wait to find out!
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  • From ANON - AiroAden on March 04, 2008
    I really like this story, I really, really do. I hope you make more chapters soon cause Naruto and Sasuke need to be together, THEY JUST HAVE TO BE!!!!!!!
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  • From shadowsonata on March 04, 2008
    Oh you better continue this story! Lol, I'll be damned if this is a oneshot!
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  • From angelofinnocence on March 04, 2008
    Please continue this piece, it's started out very well and you have my attention. I'll be watching for updates.
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