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Reviews for Camping at the lake

By : jihaaa
  • From ANON - Chloé on July 20, 2012
    Hi,
    I just want you to know that I really like your story, so don't give up ! Yes, there are a lot of insensitive bastards who don't post a review when they read a fic', and, shame on me, I sometimes like that... But I review now because it would be too bad if you stop writing...! I want to read more of your story ! And I agree that it is very surprising that you only have 9 reviews... I don't understant why because your story is great !
    Well, I don't know wha telse to say... I'm sorry if I made any mistakes but I'm French and my English is not really good (I understand English well, but I can't write or speak English very well...SOrry)
    You see, I made the effort to review while I was French, so pleaaase, reward me by continuing your story !!!
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  • From hopefulcynic on September 11, 2008
    And although you may not have a lot of reviews, you have received quite a few high votes on this story, not to mention the number of hits! Please don't give up or get discouraged! It takes a lot of work to build a fan base
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  • From hopefulcynic on September 11, 2008
    I understand your frustration very well. I'm not a writer, but I am an artist and I can understand how annoying it is when no one gives you credit for all the hard work you put in. Judging from something mentioned in an earlier chapter, I'm going to assume you aren't a native English speaker (I think you mentioned something about being Danish, sorry if I'm wrong), which can lead to a lot of minor errors in writing. None of this is your fault, but some people are grammar nazis and have a habit of running away if something isn't absolutely perfect. I love where you're going with this story, and you definitely have some very creative ideas, but you tend to skim over a lot of things without putting in much detail. People love detail. Something that I believe would help a lot both with grammar/spelling and detail, would be a proofreader. Being a university student studying for a major in English, I understand the difference a second set of eyes can make. If you are willing I would love to help you out with your story. Although I'm not a writer, I have spent quite a bit of my time on other websites and forums acting as a proofreader for writers, especially yaoi writers.

    I would really like to see you continue this story here, and if there is anything I can do to help, please don't hesitate to email me ^_^
    -Elia
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  • From kira123456 on September 08, 2008
    Hi I just read your story and i can't believe that you only got 9 reviews it is a great story and i really hope you do update on this site soon or give me the other site you have this story on.
    Anyway great work keep it up.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on June 16, 2008
    So sorry about that I tend to wait till the end or near the end to review someone's work. Just cause if I didn't I wouldn't have time to work because of all the reviews I would be sending. Please don't get discouraged. This is a very interesting story.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on June 14, 2008
    well i remember reading the first chapter of this but never any more for whatever reason. I gotta say you got a way with the smut!! holy hell! god damn! jesus christus and all that. Freaking HOOOOOTT. Plus multiple in the same chapter! i liked the last chapter for being in naru's point of view, reading a lusty uke's thoughts are just so the best *snickers*
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  • From nyge98 on March 13, 2008
    I can't wait till the next chapter. The story is so fun.
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  • From bloodyqueen on March 05, 2008
    Seems like some others are being a bit naughty in the story. Hope you update.
    I'm already drooling of excitment.
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  • From Kingcobra on March 03, 2008
    This is decent so far.

    Keep going.
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