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Reviews for A Demons Existence

By : Henki8
  • From alleycat88 on March 05, 2008
    MORE PLEASE!
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  • From LadyLaran on March 04, 2008
    It's a great start, but I suggest a beta who knows grammar. You have a lot of difficulties with getting has/have to match with the subjects. If it's plural, you use have. If it's singular, you use has. Example: Naruto has a lot of difficulties with class since he cannot read or write. Example Two: We have a lot of problems because of that boy. Example Three: Team Seven has issues with teamwork.

    See? It's just getting things to match.

    Content wise - the story is wonderful. My question is, will you deal with the aftermath of what Mizuki has done to Naruto?
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  • From serenagold on March 03, 2008
    Wow. This story is EXCELLENT!


    There is so much dark potential. Naruto's excited musings at the end of the chapter were wonderfully brilliant. Everything about this introductory chapter was great. I hope you do decide to continue it. I'm eagerly looking forward to what comes next! ^^
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