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Reviews for Promise

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - Roo on September 29, 2012
    Oh man! I just read the 2nd chapter and I wasn't disappointed!! That was awesome and it'd be SOOOOO cool if you did more!
    Great job again.
    Sincerely,
    Roo
    P.S. Sorry there isn't really any constructive criticism I can think to give... Although I do LOVE how you set up the storytelling into chunks switching between past and present like that!
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  • From ANON - Roo on September 29, 2012
    Hmmm.... That WAS rather dark-ish... I mean I would be interested to see Naruto's POV on this, ya know? Like how maybe it IS slightly no-con or how maybe he actually has heard Sasuke say those words...
    I really like how this one has me thinking! It left me with a deep impression and has me really putting thought into the story; wondering about this and that. I LOVE stories that make me do that!
    Great job!
    Sincerely,
    Roo
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  • From Beccabu on June 17, 2012
    Oh My God That was the shit I loooooved it, I dont know what else to say except please write more sasunaru Im just in awe thank you you should be paid for this Im still tingling all over I must go show this to my friends Oh God that was so good!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2011
    I am such a fucking idiot. How the hell did I miss that NEXT CHAPTER button.
    Hello. I just wrote that review up there talking about how I loved this fic but thought that it could be longer than a oneshot. Well apparently you did too cuz it seems there was already a second chapter posted... how did I miss that? Anyway it was brilliant and here's my 2 cent about the possible 3rd and 4th part.
    DO IT, DO IT!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2011
    I loved everything about this fic... except for the fact that its a oneshot. I realize that you have your hands full with kyuubi the bitch (which is awesome!) but I would love if you made this into a chaptered fic. This really left me wanting more.
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  • From ANON - Crazy Irish Lass on December 05, 2010
    I think you should, because as it is now, it feels like there is so much more to be done. Like, the fight between Sasuke and Sakura. I would actually looooove watching those two fight over Naruto. I also think, that Sasuke needs some relief. The guy maybe a bastard at the moment, but he really does love Naruto, whether unintentional or unnoticed till now, is yet to be seen.
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  • From ANON - Petit Minet on October 01, 2010
    Wow! this fic is so fuckin´awesome! Please, please continue.
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  • From ANON - cara on August 17, 2010
    they're both dicks, sasuke and kyuubi both. lol
    more would be intersting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2008
    Please make a 3rd and a 4th and a 5th and so on. That would be greatly appreciated.
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  • From ANON - Joy on July 06, 2008
    I heart this fic ^_^ Can't wait for the third, fourth,...20th part lol Seriously though its very intense, emotional read and that you're able to do that as a writer is amazing!
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  • From on June 24, 2008
    Of course you should contuine! It's a work of pure art and I'd be sad if you ended it without ending it!
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  • From ANON - akume on June 21, 2008
    Damn that was HOT. I'm glad you decided to add another chapter to it. Luv ya! ~hugs and kisses~
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on June 20, 2008
    I liked part 2. This game they are playing is tearing them apart sortah. I you do make more 'parts' I will be reading them.

    ja ne till next time
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on June 20, 2008
    I really like it! At the time I read it I didn't know there would be a second part, but I' m happy you did it! Thanks!As for the other parts, I hope you make them break that promise!They already love each other I don't really get what it is they are waiting for!(even though itmost be hard to do so)
    And I'm glad you remember "kyuubi the bitch" I hope you update it as soon as you can!Please!

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  • From ANON - Lola on June 19, 2008
    This story is FIRE!!! It is one of the best fics out there and thats only with 2 chapters! Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon ._.
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