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Reviews for Promise

By : Lechan
  • From sorryprpkitty on March 24, 2008
    My god!!!! That was one of the hottest sex scenes I have ever read....and I've read alot O_O. Seriously you have no idea that was such a good story. I love the intensity of it and I love a possesive Sasuke that's the hottest thing ever! Whooo man now I'm exhasted after reading that I need a nap^^ Oh and Thank You soooooo much your awesome!
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  • From charmpit on March 12, 2008
    Jesus, Sasuke likes it rough!

    Have I mentioned this is recommended reading?
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  • From ANON - Kimmy on March 02, 2008
    christ but that was so fucking hot...i loved it.
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  • From roelyrodriguez1 on March 01, 2008
    oh wow! great one shot i could see it becoming more!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on March 01, 2008
    ... you made me hate sasuke in this. felt soooooo bad for naruto. i think its esp bc it was never from his point of view so that non con feel was DEF there, but i guess he wants sasuke to stay.. jeez that was so depressing i couldnt even enjoy the smut and it was so well written too. But u aimed to write a dark angsty story not a happy fluffy one lol so i say: JOB VERY WELL DONE, you made me angst for sure lol
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  • From serenagold on February 29, 2008
    I really liked this. Dark is good. Darker is better. ^^
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  • From ANON - ibibi on February 29, 2008
    This fic is amazing! The level of angst and all of it seen from Sasuke's perspective. he really is an interesting character. His personality is right on point during that period in which he decided to join Orochimaru. Sasuke would do something like that. You could say he goes the person that has the biggest offering. And Naruto would do anything to get Sasuke, not for Sakura but for himself. Since he wants to matain the bonds that were created before anyone ever noticed him as just Naruto instead of the nine-tailed fox.

    This story has great smut. My pervy self was glad, and from my viewpoint as the story progressed Sasuke chnaged his perspective from seeing Naruto weak as someone that is his equal. If not more since Sasuke showed more expression as he and NAruto were doing it. Sasuke even ordered NAruto to hold him and To say that he loves Sasuke. Naruto maybe dense but I think he knows that Sasuke has changed his desire to own him physically to that of true love.

    Great fic and I liked the flashbacks, it shows how brutal Sasuke was and then how in the present they both are pleased. I look foward to reading your other stories and reviwing.




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  • From ANON - subtlethief on February 29, 2008
    I must say this is one of the best sex scenes i've read: explit, passionate, intimate, hot hot hot:))and i expecially love some details about this lemon...It's a pity that it is only oneshot (it have good start for a long story, stories like that must go on go on go on...)... It leaves me wait for Kyuubi the Bitch update. Good luck!
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  • From Shadowfox3163 on February 28, 2008
    Dude that was.....*nosebleed*...amazing! I love the way you write!
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  • From ANON - Charlie on February 28, 2008
    HOT!!!
    Please write a sequel.
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  • From ANON - hpn on February 28, 2008
    That made me cry. It's really sad and sweet at the same time.
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  • From TimeFlys on February 28, 2008
    Yes it was kind-of dark but it was exactly what I was in the mode for ^_^. The sex scenes were fantastic!! I just wish I knew if Naruto was really being forced or if he enjoyed being that intimate with Sasuke. Maybe a sequel from Naruto's point-of-view? I’d love a sequel!!!! Pretty Please write a sequel?! *Reviewer gives author big sad, puppy eyes.*
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  • From charmpit on February 28, 2008
    Holy shit that was hot.
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  • From Mort on February 28, 2008
    Very nice- You did an amazing job of changing, the perspective in time-
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  • From mls on February 28, 2008
    love it !!!!! i wish it was more than an oneshot!!!!!
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