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Reviews for When They Choose You

By : REM1985
  • From Chronostorm on March 06, 2008
    Well it was certainly interesting but you really didn't describe Kyuubi's human form you got what i think Sakura's breast size right but i think Hinata's would range from c to d cup i think she was at the ver least b cup before the the time skip given what was shown and what not other then that pretty good so keep it up.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on March 06, 2008
    Great story can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Gnosismaster on March 06, 2008
    Good but please just choose one word instead of putting both Master/Mate. It gets annoying after a while. Just use master.
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  • From Coldstone on March 06, 2008
    Totally awesome.

    I love stories like this, where the characters are turned into some sort of furries. I once read an Inu Yaha Story where Kagome also became Hanyou.

    (Maybe you should consider to use the japanese Terms for demon and half-demon. Youkai and Hanyou, but that is up to you.)

    I'm totally amazed with this story and I'm also eager to read more. Especially Tsunade's, Jiraiya's and Kakashi's reaction about their new physical state. ANd of course the reaction of all their friends... Hell it will be so much fun, to see Kiba's reaction that Hinata, Sakura and Naruto are now more canine like than his family (Big evil grin). I'm impatiently waiting for the next update.
    Keep up your good work.
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  • From zero12789 on February 28, 2008
    that was very good. i loved it. the whole thing about domination got me heart racing. my only qualm is the fuzzy thing kind of lame. it usually comes up when the kyubi is part of the story. other than that i loved it. the page was wider then the screen and i think it should have been in the threesome secton instead of the het section. but great
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  • From DragonMan220 on February 27, 2008
    Awesome, totally awesome, I can't wait to see what happens when everyone wakes up. I almost feel sorry for Hiashi if he tries to kill Hinata for becoming a demon, Naruto and Sakura will rip him apart if Hinata doesn't beat them to it.
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  • From Legacy on February 27, 2008
    I have to say, please use word wrap before you submit something. Scrolling back and forth like a typewriter is frustrating.
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