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Reviews for Beautiful Tragedy

By : Mayana
  • From charmpit on March 01, 2008
    Didn't take anyone long to find Naruto, did it?

    Is Naruto going to beat Sasuke or hump him into submission?

    Where does Itachi fit into this story?
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  • From spoon10488 on March 01, 2008
    Very interesting. I like where this is going. Can't wait for more.
    =)

    p.s. I like your friends name. 'Spork' Lol
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  • From serenagold on March 01, 2008
    "Tired?"

    "Yep. *yawn* Killing massive amounts of people by ripping them to shreds will do that to a person, teme."

    "Tch, whatever dobe. You sleep on the couch."

    =^^= hehehe. If he only knew.
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  • From spoon10488 on February 28, 2008
    I seen the show Elfen Lied. I'm very interested to see how you change it. I wasn't a fan of the ending of the show, so I'm hoping things will work out happier in your story. Either way it can't be bad, not when Sasuke and Naruto get some Yaoi action going. yummy!
    Can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on February 26, 2008
    awww. i was kinda looking foward to naru doing the whole 'nu' thing lucy did when she wanted to say or show you something since she had the whole split personality thing going on. but hey this makes it less predictable, so, please continue. i like what you've got so far.
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  • From on February 26, 2008
    I just read this and I like it. I have so many questions running through my mind but I'll save you the headache and just wait for the next update. It will be interesting to see is Naruto starts to develope feelings for Sasuke since he's being nice to him.

    Oh and thanks for reviewing my new fic, it is much appreciated.

    cai
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  • From charmpit on February 26, 2008
    So far so good.

    Naruto is naked and wet...so, is Sasuke going to take him home and get naked and wet too?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2008
    Wow! Naruto didn't kill Sasuke. And Sasuke is actually helping Naruto. Amazing! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From Plaguerose on February 26, 2008
    Here's a review!!! No stopping without a good ending/cliffy!
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  • From MoveThemHands on February 26, 2008
    Boo!! Short chapter! Boo to the shortness, but I liked it still XD

    Hahah, Sasuke bastard gave up his coat...how sweet *chuckles* So far the characters are still a bit OOC but you'll probably work through that later, well I hope so anyways XD

    I do like the fact that Naruto isn't a cry baby :D

    Good chapter, still look forward to more!
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  • From serenagold on February 26, 2008
    So Naruto has amnesia, or is he just lying? He's a sneaky secretive little demon, so I'm gonna have to go with the later.

    Its going to be exciting later on when Naruto discovers that Sasuke is Itachi's brother. Good thing he didn't give out his last name right away, eh? ^^
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  • From serenagold on February 26, 2008
    HOly crap! This is how Elfen Lied starts out?? I was always too turned off by its artstyle to really seek out any interest in the show. Now it seems I should be questioning that action and check it out. O_O


    Anyway, awesome first chapter. Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2008
    Great first chapter! Please continue!!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on February 25, 2008
    omfg! elfen lied! i liked that series a lot. very twisted that one was. looking foward to the next update.
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  • From ladywolfTerri on February 25, 2008
    Wonderful start!!.. now I can't wait to find out what happens next... just as a note, you called Naruto Lucy once and refered to him as a her once...^^
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