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  • From bloodshound on July 07, 2011
    hot... smoking, skin scorching HOT!
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  • From ilgs on May 22, 2008
    This is so hot and lovely :) and you did manage to make them feel like equals - that's great, this sort of balance is something most fandom authors stumble over and never quite succeed in portraying
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  • From vanessaclarke on February 25, 2008
    SOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooo AAAAAAAAAWSOOOOOOOooo....mE!!!! I love you more than chocolate!! Oh I'm so HAPPY! XD
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  • From Allys on February 25, 2008
    Are you okay?? How are we killing you?
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on February 25, 2008
    wow i really liked that story! so good when naru got turned on by sas being jealous and telling sasuke no one had ever been inside him before :D I request you listen to MORE naughty music and KEEP WRITING! Next we get to see incredibly sexy naruto wanting sasuke to take him. I loves me a hot demanding uke pleeeeaaaase *smiles* yay for you!
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  • From sweetciel on February 25, 2008
    Brilliant!
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  • From riddlestar on February 25, 2008
    wow..really amazing. i love narusasu(you know that, hehe) so im grateful that anyone with good writing skills posts something like this. kudos. i want the end of my story to be something like this.. though how im gonna do it i have no idea.. this was awesome. i would love to see more stories from you.
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  • From steisi on February 25, 2008
    Beiful work, love. I downloaded the song and read this while listening to it. I gotta say, the effect was impressive. If this is the product of you listening dirty music, I wholeheartedly encourage you to do it more oftren! I especially liked how neither Naruto nor Sasuke were portrayed as too uke-ish. The equal relationship you hinted at was a refreshing thing indeed after all the stories where one of them is firmly bottom, and the other constantly top. Once again, great work and congratulations on a job well done! Kisses, hon!
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  • From mls on February 25, 2008
    loved it!!!!! i hope there will be more to this story!!!
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  • From Allys on February 25, 2008
    Dude, my heart is bursting, and I am grinning like a fucking idiot XD. *sighs happily* That was ridiculously fantastic! *Loves on you*. From beginning to end, all the preparation, the dance scene, the realisations the absolute freaking hotness! Completely drool-worthy, while totally overwhelmingly romantically Perfect. I loved especially that you wrote them as equals. Sasuke claimed it and it was completely true. I love when there's no absolute seme or uke between them. I find that so limiting, this was so wonderful *HUGS U*. THANK YOU!!! And OMFG you said FaR is coming soon *dies of happy* You have no idea how intensely happy you've made me XD. Thank you :). *chuu*♥
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  • From cynaga on February 25, 2008
    so hawt~!
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  • From sakuyalove on February 25, 2008
    LOVE, LOVE, LOVED IT! Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 25, 2008
    wow!!!! Is there going to be more, you know with Sasuke getting all dominant???? Please
    Slave
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  • From LadyWolf on February 24, 2008
    I enjoyed reading this!! I loved it when Sasuke almost kicked his ass for answering that one fateful question, "you've done this before, haven't you?" He should have lied, Lied like a rug!!!!!!!!
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  • From on February 24, 2008
    Fantastic job!! Oh I do love a good smutty Naru/Sasu/Naru fic. I thought it was nice for Naruto to offer his ass to Sasuke, if that isn't love...

    Oh and many thanks for promoting my anemia due to blood loss XD
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