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Reviews for Chrysanthemum

By : AWickedMemory
  • From drivven on March 08, 2008
    I am getting more into this pairing all the time. Between this and one other fic....I'll be a rabid fangirl soon. Good job. More please.
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  • From on March 08, 2008
    Wai! So great! Everyone was very IC and the dialogs were really entertaining. This fic is so much fun! And oooh, so THAT's why the title is Chrysanthemum XDDD Keep up the good work!
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  • From sweetciel on March 08, 2008
    Really really good! You got me hooked ^_^
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  • From ANON - kyandoru on March 08, 2008
    Well I can't decide if Shika is just being nice or if he is trying to subtly get Neji into his house and seduce him! ^^;; I mean come on! It is sooo cute, though. Thanks for udating!
    ja ne
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  • From HannaFO on March 08, 2008
    Hehe they are so cute those two :D Gotta Love Yoshino XD
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  • From SecretQuill on March 04, 2008
    oh how cute!! and it's a very good story, i hope shikamaru can get a little protective/possessive over neji at some time, that's just so sweet to read!
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  • From ANON - luxeflex on March 03, 2008
    on my quest for more shika/neji fics, I found this one ^^
    it's great so far, I'm really curious as to what will happen next.

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  • From on March 03, 2008
    It was a mistake? O_____o I thought you did it on purpose XDDD It's ok though. It didn't ruin the story in any way. And yeah, my big bro's an architect. He's in to Naruto but definitely NOT in to yaoi XDDDDD so even if I have the guts to ask him he wouldn't want to have anything to do with my fics. Great job so far. I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter (not that I'm rushing you or anything ^_^)
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  • From Travellyr on March 02, 2008
    *giggling*
    Ah, Shikamaru's right. All the women in his life are so troublesome. XD And Neji's so defensive! I like that too. Go, deprived, defensive Neji-man, go! SLEEP IN! :D
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  • From ANON - SGOU on March 02, 2008
    Another great chapter. I like how Neji and Shika are getting closer. Oh, and to answer your question, in the arc when they are chasing after Sasuke and the Sound Four, Shika mentions that his Jutsu is worthless at night- his excuse for waiting until morning to ambush the Sound ninjas right before Neji's fight. :) But I like yours better- after all, there are all kinds of shadows at night.
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  • From Travellyr on February 29, 2008
    Tiny typo in the beginning- it ought to be 11:something AM, unless Neji sat around for a lot longer than five hours.

    I don't really have anything too constructive to say: "I like it!" gets boring and kind of useless... ^^;; I mean, I hate to hear that in art critiques. But I also like to hear it about writing, so!
    I like it. I like Shikamaru making Neji sleep in, I like Neji being fussy, I like Hiashi wincing about some of the o-miai candidates, and I giggled when he made Neji that deal. I like it. Good job. :3
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  • From drivven on February 29, 2008
    I understand the RL thing. Mine is a true pain most of the time. Thanks for the pick me up. Was one of those days for me. I do hope you get more soon. *hugs*
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  • From ANON - sabrina on February 29, 2008
    it was getting good
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  • From on February 29, 2008
    Niiice progress ^_^ I like this chapter very, very much! I love your Shikamaru! And yeah, he's tone deaf. He said so ^o^ It was when he fought Tayuya, memorizing the movements of her fingers instead of the flute's melody to read her attacks. It was also interesting that you switch which of them are jounin and chuunin. Hiashi's portrayal was also great. Ah, such a cool fic. And the floor plan of Shikamaru's apartment! Awesome! God, when I was starting Golden Murder, all I could think about was how I can make such a thing for the Hyuuga Mansion (too embarrassed to ask my brother to make it for me XD). I've also been dreaming about showing the insides of that apartment building in Unspoken Rules. I wish I have your skills XD. But I'm rambling! So anyway, great work and I'll be waiting for the next one ^_^
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  • From solitare1 on February 28, 2008
    This story is nice...I can really get in to it. I think I am starting to like the Nara/Neji pair.
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