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Reviews for Chrysanthemum

By : AWickedMemory
  • From Jien on March 13, 2008
    I await the oncoming surprise and smut =^.^= updates soon!
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  • From drivven on March 13, 2008
    hehehe, guess your pen-name is more common than I thought. There's someone who posts in narutoyaoi with that one. Anyway, I'll let you know what I come across.

    Very good chapter. I really can't wait for the next. Their so sweet and don't even know it! Things are going to heat up I think. Thanks for the read. :)
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  • From Luma on March 13, 2008
    Mm yeah. You saw it, but I can only imagine it. No fun.
    Anywho. I liked this chapter. xD I thought it was kinda funny. What with the conversations between Neji and Shikamaru.
    Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ladyicondraco on March 13, 2008
    Very well done, I am really enjoying this story.

    One thing though, the smoking is really working in this story, and I don't know about the anime, but in the manga Shikamaru stops smoking after he's properly avenged Asuma.
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  • From melvin3228 on March 13, 2008
    you rock
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  • From bloodstone on March 13, 2008
    I love how you wrote this chapter. It was cool. I liked it...a lot. It was a lot of fun. I hope you will try it again. I know you said you wont, but I hope you will change your mind...yes I likeed it that much. I can't wait for the next chapter. I can see things getting very intreasting and very amusing, very soon. LOL Update as soon as you can! XD

    ~Persnole Note~
    Sorry about my bad spelling. I spell things how they sound, and well just for future note, if you find I word I wrote and don't know it, just sound it out, and it should get the meaning across...or at lest I hope it dose. *sweat drop* The word tiype = tight....meaning the feeling you get in your throut when you feel like your about to cry, and trying like hell not to. I hope that helps. ^___^;
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  • From drivven on March 11, 2008
    Reply to you:
    Yeah, The Way Things Are was the fic. I like that one a lot too. If I find any more good ones I'll be sure to let you know. I've seen you on LJ, I think so I could tell you there. (I started writing one at a friends request, but it turned all angsty on me... O.o So, it's a bit stalled right now and I am not happy with it. *sighs* Yours is soo much better!)

    Very moving. I am completely impressed. (bummed a bit, but I'll get over it) But absolutely totally impressed. Good chapter. Very good. I like how you've built everything up, layer on layer. It's going very well and your timing is wonderful

    Keep it up
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  • From ANON - Tyra on March 11, 2008
    Really good story.
    Amazing chapters..
    Heh, I really like Shikamaru's mom, now. xD

    Wow, poor Neji.
    His mission didn't sound good at all.
    Good that Shikamaru was there to comfort Neji-cha~n! xD
    Ah, and held him when he cried.
    Cute and fluffy.. Well, sad actually.

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From bloodstone on March 11, 2008
    *clear, tiyten throut* I...I think this chapter was what was needed to give this stroy a needed depth, that alot of lighter hart stroys do not have. But in assesnts give this story greater vaule. It is not purtty, and not eassy to read, but needed to give it a greater life. The job that Neji worked so hard for, is not eassy. But hopefule when he comes to turms with the darker side of it, that he will remember, that even through he is on a solo misseion, and can not do anthing at that moment to help. He 'is' a vitel part of the mission "to" be able to help. He is the one to get the "priseless" info for them/others to finsh the job, and complet the mission and help the people.

    Anyways, great job of the chappter. I hope you update it soon. I want to see what happens next! GREAT Work! ^___^
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  • From HannaFO on March 11, 2008
    I just saw Yoshino a few times, but the way i read it it sounds just like her :D
    Very sad update :( Poor Neji. And poor villagers ... Well thankies :D
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  • From Luma on March 11, 2008
    Awah! Poor Neji! I can imagine that baby... not pretty.
    But oo~h this chapter was good too. =o Nice and dark. Just the way I like it. x3
    I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From melvin3228 on March 11, 2008
    Wow, I have only ever read 1 fic that ever made me cry before. You have managed to make me cry again.
    And I Thank-You!!
    This is so well written, and detailed.
    I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens next.
    I do have to say that I hope that you make them a sexually active couple I really do love this pairing!!!!!
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  • From SecretQuill on March 09, 2008
    cute chapter!
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  • From bloodstone on March 09, 2008
    To Quet "Um, and to ward off any suspicion that might happen-- no, it's not going to be a deathfic. ^_^; The symbolism of the flower isn't exactly foreshadowing anything *quite* that extreme." So the plant is not to symbolisy any ones death, but it is a symbolism of something, corret? And death dose not neasasarly mean physicale death, but it could just mean the end of someting, to began something new...With that in mind, than maybe, if I am inclined to asum or quess, than maybe the flower is to symblisys the end or 'death' of Neji's and Shika's accostumed life, and the strat of a new one. In which they will biled together? Well that just my brain over anaslsing things. LOL Anyways, great chapter. I can't wait for the next one! Great Work! ^___^
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  • From Luma on March 08, 2008
    Pretty flower.
    Psh I've been to lazy to review before, but I'm absolutely loving this fic. x3
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