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Reviews for Chrysanthemum

By : AWickedMemory
  • From Raholea on March 20, 2008
    neji... and shikamaru....
    in a pond..
    soaked wet
    and laughing their heads off....

    absolutely perfect. not to mention... the thought of the two of them wet in formal clothes is rather... appealing. makes ya wonder what *could* have happened if they were really attracted to each other (and not in the cold) ..... XD
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  • From sweetciel on March 19, 2008
    So so so very good! I LOVED the meeting ^_^ They are just so cute together. How could neji not see it?
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  • From ANON - Tyra on March 19, 2008
    Ah, oh my. xDD
    I just love the blushing, ticklish, virgin Neji. xD
    He gets along with Shikamaru quite well, even though they are so different.. (One's lazy, the other's too uptight)

    Hehe. xD
    Nudging and poking. Then sitting and laughing in a pond. xD ..In February. :O
    I hope Yoshino doesn't smack Shikamaru too hard. :D

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From animelovergirl on March 19, 2008
    Okay, okay, I won't compare you to pen_name again (and yes, she IS a goddess) ^_^ But I CAN tell you that you are a brilliant, awesome, amazing and damn talented author!!! I bow don't before you ^^ And don't worry, I didn't die, glued to my chair (not yet, anyway) but by now I might be dieing of laughter. That was so hilarious, the two of them sitting in a pond, slipping on algae, kois swimming around them. I was howling with laughter and I'm still snickering. My mom is throwing me a side-glance, totally weirded out by me ^_^ Thank you for this chaper and please keep going. And yes, this time I'll add it - ASAP!!!
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  • From Jien on March 19, 2008
    awww.....*pouts* but the plot is good so I'll give you cookies for that ~~ XD
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  • From ANON - melvin3228 on March 19, 2008
    I really love how you manage to keep Neji in character but still manage to get him to unwind. The mental image of the two of them in the pond will be ever present in my mind for a long, long time. Again I can't get enough of this story and love the way you write!!
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  • From Luma on March 19, 2008
    More or less it's quite unexpected for Neji to slip and fall into a pond. Hilarious when I think about it. -Sniggers-
    Mm this entire chapter was quite amusing. I'm looking forward to the next update.

    Ha! M'lady was rather amusing. I don't normally read one-shots, but I simply couldn't resist.
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  • From TheLightsShadow on March 19, 2008
    -giggles- Oh god, that was insanely funny! Two grown men acting like children ^^ priceless!

    I'm loving how you are building up the relationship between Neji and Shikamaru. I mean, I'm all for the fic starting out with them being interested with eachother, but I like to see some past to it all. You are doing a fabulous job ^^ I don't think anyone could've done it better ^3^ Muah!

    Can't wait for more!
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  • From llyoung on March 18, 2008
    Loved the pond incident.
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  • From animelovergirl on March 14, 2008
    I just found your story and ... DAMN what a story it was. I sucked it up in about two hours - eating inclusiv - and then re-read it again because it's so damn fucking brilliant I can't even find proper words to describe it. The best praise for me to give to you is that your story is up to par with pen_name's fanfics for me. And that is saying something because open is my goddess! So whatever you plan on doing, DO IT QUICKLY!!!! I'll be waiting in front of computer until you continue and if I starve to death or take root in my chair then it's entirely your fault! ^_^
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  • From SecretQuill on March 14, 2008
    sweet as usual ;)
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  • From Quirk on March 14, 2008
    It's a good story, and I can't really think of any constructive criticism I can give at this time. I'm too floaty from reading! The previous chapter- 7- was really sad and moving. I think I like your humor best. Thank you, and looking forward to more of your hardwork!
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  • From on March 13, 2008
    Yay to believable dark chapters! My... I just love you so much for that. Sometimes, when making dark scenes, people tend to overdo it. But not you. It was really great. I wish I can elaborate feelings like you do in your writings. As for the latest chapter, I simply adore the way you write the interaction between Shikaku and Yoshino. Awesome, AWESOME job! On both chapters! ^_^ Now I'm gonna wait for that omiai (oh it's gonna be good! I just know it!)
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  • From ANON - Tyra on March 13, 2008
    Heheh.
    Oh my God!
    Shikamaru and Neji's conversations were so funny! xD
    But poor Neji (and Shika too!, still having nightmares..

    Wow.
    Is Hiashi planning a marriage between Shikamaru and Neji, now? ;D
    Kukuku, can't wait 'till the information is shared to the boys. :D

    "Shut up and watch where you're going."
    "Yes, mother."

    "Shut up and go to sleep."
    "Yes, sir."
    Hehehe, Neji's so comanding. xD
    Shikamaru's just too funny!

    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From HannaFO on March 13, 2008
    Wah an o-miai.. Very good :D *snicker* Can't wait for their reaction :D As always a great update!
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