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Reviews for Chrysanthemum

By : AWickedMemory
  • From ANON - too lazy to sign in on March 28, 2008
    I am just waiting for someone to walk in without permission and see them in bed together. Like Ino, or Naruto or something. This is hilarious, I like! I like most of your stories actually. Keep writing.
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  • From Duomi on March 28, 2008
    Hee, but spoilers are fun! *innocent* I still love that Neji burned the bread. That line of reasoning used to occur to me but dad gave me a long lecture on ovens that made me think twice... Anyway! Hurray for first kiss! But now, the moment of decision: lemon or tangerine? Only you can decide... can you tell I'm listening to hyper music? ...I want a tangerine now... but need to sleep. Tangerine tangent. Anyway, as I was saying, I liked this chapter! ^_^;;; Neji being like, wtf is Shikamaru thinking? amused me, and how Shikamaru just responded with a 'yeah' and Neji got pissed at him. That was delightful. I can't explain why the exploding fountain look was funny! It amused me a lot. That's all I can say. Hmm.... going to bed now, yup.
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  • From AMODonnell on March 28, 2008
    This is one of the few good stories I've been able to find on AFF...usually I just come here looking for badfic, but occasionally I find a pleasant surprise like this one.

    The only thing that threw me off temporarily -- yeah, as you mention in your notes on this chapter, chrysanthemums are a pretty traditional symbol for male homosexuality. I'd assumed that the gift of the chrysanthemum was Shikamaru's mother hinting that she thought that Shikamaru and Neji were already a couple...it took me a little while to figure out that she hadn't thought of this.
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  • From Luma on March 28, 2008
    It's about damn time. Psh.
    This chapter was all WAFFy like...
    It burns!
    -rolls around-
    Just kidding.
    Looking forward to the next chapter.

    xD
    I try not to read them though cause most of the time, there's no satisfaction with the ending, or the one-shot in general sometimes.
    Hell a lot of the time with some of the ones I've read, the author left it wide open for a continuation of some sort.
    Hardly ever happens, so it's just really disappointing.
    I mean I might occasionaly read a PWP, but I like for there to at least be SOME kind of prupose to it.
    Hell I'll read a Two-shot if it's not just all sex.
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  • From Jien on March 28, 2008
    Cookies!!! Update soon~~ can't wait for the actual yaoi =^.^=
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  • From ANON - melvin3228 on March 28, 2008
    Have I told you how much I love you?????????
    I can't believe they finally kissed! I am very impressed with the way you built that up and left me wanting more, so, so much more!!! I hope I can ask a favor? I hate fics that leave one as the seme and one as uke, I'd love to see this paring as a couple who view eachothers as equals.
    Again, have I told you that I love you???????
    I have gone back and read all of your fics and I can't get enough of your writing!!

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  • From HannaFO on March 28, 2008
    AWWW!!! this entire chapter was so sweeet!! And YAY *bounces up and down* Their first kiss!! Kawaii!!!!
    And yes i read yaoi infront of her. She doesn't really care what i do, besides i am slowly turing her into a yaoi fan like me :D:D She's become upsesed with all the yaoi amv's on youtube heh :D anyhow thanks alot for the long update!!
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  • From Duomi on March 25, 2008
    Fanart almost done but coloring is so not ftw right now. I saved notes this time!

    "There was just something about waking up from a bloody nightmare just to realize that it was a memory..."

    Good line, draws the impact home sharply. (That scene was also very serious and probably touches on things most fanfiction won't, like the serious side of missions, etc.. I'm entirely guessing, since Death Note doesn't have ninja, so I'm not likely to encounter that sort of thing in the fics I actually read of late...)

    "Stop curling into the covers! What part of 'get up' don't you understand?!"
    "The part where you hit me with a pillow!"

    Hee! I loved that.

    "Shikamaru wouldn't do that. He'd think it was troublesome to bother finding an affair outside of a marriage. Creates too much drama. Kid hates that kind of stuff."

    That also amused me-- too troublesome to have an affair! Wonderful.

    Shikamaru let out a slow breath. "You're annoyed at me."
    "No, I'm not."
    "Yeah, you are. You tensed up, and you're glaring at the fountain as if it should explode."

    That? Also hilarious.

    I like it! I'm actually looking forward to reading more. Especially since I know at least one scene that happens next chapter... *feels psychic* Hee, future-telling artwork.
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  • From Duomi on March 24, 2008
    Oh, I forgot to add. "When's the sex?Lololol!!1". *flees to avoid instant death* Remember, I'm cleaning rat cages, no killing!
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  • From Duomi on March 24, 2008
    So I was under the impression that I'd read this to read it, but I'm on chapter six now and haven't been doing the *other* things I intended to because of it, so I'm gonna reply now, then go get a cookie and clean the rat cages. Why am I typing this when you're sitting next to me? Saa. Hi! Anyway, comment. I'm enjoying this so far! The details on some things confuse me, though you talking about Naruto has helped with the confusion and I can't remember which details they were, but overall, enjoyable! Shikamaru's characterization is really adorable, with how he'll occasionally reply really seriously to Neji and how Neji sort of accidentally ended up living with him. Very cute. Also, the pillow fight with the shadow attack was hilarious, and I loved Shikamaru telling his mom, "It needs water?" just to piss her off. That line pwned. Decided I'd reply now so I wouldn't forget those details, since I forgot like, four other things I was gonna mention. ^_^;;;
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  • From ANON - Tori on March 24, 2008
    Let me start off by saying that chapter was so damn fun read, much like the rest of the story. I couldn't stop laughing when Neji found out Shikamaru was bisexual, I could just imagine his shock expression. Whoo! I hardly ever review stories 'cause I figure if the author wasn't sure of their work they wouldn't put it up to be read but like I had to stop and review this one 'cause it's actually really....good? I don't think I can think of a more accurate word haha. Umm but yea, I actually just started watching Naruto about a month ago after a friend gave me a fanfic too...look at(?), because I most can't read Japanese and now I'm hopelessly fixated on the show, but much more so on Shikamaru and Kiba haha. Anyways you're really good at the writing and I hope the story continues soon, but no pressure ya know.
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  • From digiditz on March 21, 2008
    Please update soon, I don't think I can wait for the next installment. Neji and Shikamaru are rapidly becoming one of my favorite pairings and you write them very well.
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  • From bloodstone on March 20, 2008
    That was GREAT! I love it. I can't want for the next mirreg meeting. That was cool! Did I say I loved it. I LOVE IT!!! Great chapter! Update as soon as you can! I need more you hear me, MORE! LOL Great Work! ^___^
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  • From HannaFO on March 20, 2008
    Haha the pond incedent was effing hilarious!! my sister was looking at me (giggiling by the compter) like i was some mad woman with two heads :D:D Thanks for a funny update!!!
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  • From on March 20, 2008
    Aaawh... *blushes* Thanks for the compliment. And what's so blasphemous about what yaoilovergirl said? *goes to check previous reviews* Oh... OH! OMG! *blushes again* Well, I think you're a BETTER writer than I am. Seriously! Now let's stop this and on to the review, people! XD I just love the interactions here. Shikamaru and Neji being playful is refreshing, and the trio of parents are just amazing. You know, it's a wonder how Shikamaru could remain a genius with the way his parents keeps smacking him upside the head XDDD
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