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Reviews for Living Nightmare

By : PrplGrl
  • From Luma on February 24, 2008
    I must say... that was a very weird an unexpected twist. And yet somehow I was still expecting it... As soon as the description of Sesshomaru started I couldn't help but start laughing. Ah what fun.
    I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on February 23, 2008
    All I can say is wow. This story is unlike any I have read so far. I love it, and you make me want to read more.
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  • From ANON - Alex on February 22, 2008
    Okay, okay--back up a bit.

    WTF?!

    I can't believe that Shikamaru would get mindcontrolled so easily. I mean, yeah, sure, he's in a doggy form but...err, wtf? This is Shikamaru for crying out loud...But, I'm sure you had a good reason for this, because, well, yeah. It made the story flow more. Just think about it if Shika had actually struggled with the voice in his mind! O-O The possibilities...

    Anyway, wow. Just wow. Shino is Naruto's boyfriend? Oo, now THAT is a very cute and unique pairing. XD I like it. Cheers to your genius!

    And, and. I'm wondering, you know. Who the voice is, yeah. Can I guess that it's--errr. Hm. It COULD be some Naruto villain or (dun dun dun) one of the Rookie Nine! Le gasp! Shuffle back and facefault--yeah! It could be! I mean, just wow. It'd be so twisted if it were Chouji or Neji or...or (LE GASP) KAKASHI!

    Okay, okay, back it up there. I was only thinking of the possibilities, so you don't have to laugh at my lame attempts to assuage my curiosity. :3 But so far so good, you've got me hooked. xD
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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on February 22, 2008
    OMG this story is awesome! I wanna know who attacked Shika, I wanna know why the voice in his head told him to do that, I wanna read the next chapter! lol
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  • From Luma on February 21, 2008
    First chapter coud have a been a little scarier, but it's still good.
    The whole Shika turning into a dog is highly amusing to, despite the whole first chapter and the plot of the story. Ah well.
    This is good. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Alex on February 21, 2008
    Homegee!! Shika's about to maul Naruto! And the whole thing about dog food made me laugh. Oh, and lets not forget the whole crotch-level thing. Ingenious really. That and the fact that Shika's a dog that no one can communicate with...that's just really really sad.

    You're AWESOME!
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  • From ANON - Freez on February 21, 2008
    OMG. I love it. Wow... I didn't think i would but... amazingly put together and well played out so far.
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  • From ANON - Alex on February 21, 2008
    W-woah! That is some pret-ty scary crap. You had me almost screaming in my seat! xD I was like, "Oh nooo, oh shiiittt" and then when the thing came out and molested Shikamaru, I was like, "ohshitohshitohshitohshit!" and then...yeah. I sympathize for him, 'cos he was being molested in his dreams for two months, and that whole scene with the near-rape thingy...Yeah, it was pretty horrifying.

    What-? You think you didn't make it scary enough? Psshaw, dood. You made it plenty scary!

    So, anyway, yeah, you SHOULD continue to write this fic. Why? Because it has so much goddamn potential. Like BAM! What a queer plot, I thought, and then I read the story and was instantly hooked. Seriously. It's pretty well-written, and Shikamaru is in-character...And everyone else is paired up with everyone else...So, yeah. Sounds pretty promising.

    Your descriptions are so vivid that I can picture it in my mind.

    Were you watching some sort of horror movie erstwhile writing this? xD 'Cos I swear...

    I'm sorta wondering who the freak that molested Shikamaru is...because, well, it can't be any of the other NARUTO characters, right? I mean, the main, usual kinda people. Like Neji, Naruto, Sasuke, blahblahblah...

    TEMARI.

    xD Sorry, I just had to add her, because she's so manly to me. Especially in Shippuden, her voice is so low like a man's, harhar.

    Anyway, near the end, when Shikamaru's bones were cracking and all things creepy, did that mean he turned into some sort of werewolf? Some sort of...uh, not-so-very-romantic kinda person thingy, demon? xD I felt sorry for him that everyone left him out of the whole 'romance' factor...but yeah. Poor Shika.

    So. Hm. Who the heck is that mysterious nightmarey being?! I WANT TO KNooowwww~www! -Wails-

    Great job, by the way. o_O
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  • From bears24 on February 21, 2008
    ooOOOOOooo. V interesting. Can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on February 20, 2008
    I thought it was plenty horrifying enough. :) You had me all the way through, your descriptive writing was very effective. I'd love to see you continue this, at least through the 'three days'. Nicely done.
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