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By : Yamatochan
  • From KotoneHime on May 04, 2008
    aw~ so sweet ^^ I'm glad they got over themselves and said it finally :D
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  • From LadyRonin on April 30, 2008
    HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
    even though the chapter was a mistake, i had reread #3 to see where i was at and i think that sasuke's dad and naruto's are more than just friends (maybe with benefits). that would be so cool add itachi and kuubyi and that will make it out of the ballpark. can't wait to see the next chapter. and i hope that all your birthday wishes come true.
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  • From Kingcobra on April 30, 2008
    Uh, where's chapter 4? It's more of an author's note then an actual chapter.
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  • From DeadlyTeardrops on April 13, 2008
    Oooh mikä yllätys! Yks miun lemppari ficcin kirjoittajista on suomalainen! Wow! En kyllä ois ikinä uskonut kun niin hyvin kirjotat enkkua! Aivan mahtava ficci! Kerrankin jotain omaperästä eikä sitä samanlaista mitä muut kirjoittajat kirjottavat!

    Keep up with the good work! (
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  • From Jien on April 12, 2008
    Sauke's such n arrogant bastard Love it, update soon!!
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  • From KotoneHime on April 11, 2008
    Aw~ so cute but kinda sad. Stupid Naru XD I hope they clear things up quickly. And Sasuke needs to stop lying to himself and poor Naruto!!
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  • From LadyRonin on March 31, 2008
    sasuke's brownie fetish is cute. thanks for the update. i have a quick question though is naruto's father going to find out about sasuke's interest in him before or after they get together. can't wait for the next update.
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  • From KotoneHime on March 31, 2008
    Its so cute =^^= i can't wait for the next update!! Quite possibly the most adorable scene for Sasuke and Naruto I've ever read.
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  • From blacksuede on March 31, 2008
    aww .. fluffy cotton scene ♥
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  • From on March 15, 2008
    Great first chapter! I can't wait to see how this story develops! I will look forward to future chapters!
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  • From Jien on February 20, 2008
    interesting, update soon!!
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  • From Anaheyla on February 20, 2008
    It seems like a rather interesting story, but I can't read it.

    You need to space it out more, note when someone is speaking and if it is not obvious, who is speaking.

    More paragraphs, etcetcetc.

    Do all that then I'll tell you what I think. :)
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  • From SolsticeViper on February 20, 2008
    The story looks promising, but Ditto Word_Slave. I have no patience to try and figure out who is talking.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 20, 2008
    I think the story has promise but it's hard as heck to read. You need to space out who is talking into different paragraphs and add speaking tags if it's not obviousl who's talking. ONce that's done, I think your star rating will go up tremendously. I didn't finish the chapter though because I didn't have the patience to sort through everything. It would also make the chapter longer and flow better.
    Slave
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  • From LadyRonin on February 20, 2008
    this was a really nice first chapter. i would never have guessed that you would have made his dream to be a football player. the possibility to be the president of the united states or some big company maybe even a movie star but football was no where in the list. was naruto's mother killed in childbirth or did he when he was a litle older. since both man seem to be unatached will you hook up sasuke's father with naruto's dad that would be so hot (naruto uke puppy eyes attack). will itachi be with someone and if there are any suggestions i put the table pein. i can't wait to see where your story goes.
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