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Reviews for Qwiky Lube

By : Zrina
  • From pooh on February 20, 2008
    REALLY nice one....you absolutely have to write a sequel =)
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  • From ANON - xpyne on February 20, 2008
    ::Squeeeeeeeeeal!!!!:: hahaaha i totally almost missed this one because i saw the title and was like, eww!! some 14 girls have no couth! LOL them went i was stalking checking your profile to see if Blackmail and Betrayal had been updated, i saw YOU wrote this, which of course meant i had to read it! i love it! the tension was so small-farm what-the-hell-do-i-do-with-my-life intense and realistic, well, as realistic as sexy ass buys rolling around f***ing on the floor of a Qwiky Lube gets. XDDDD it was making me so sad, though, to think Naruto and Sasuke would somehow drift apart and lose the thread of destiny threatening to entwine them! so the ending was perfect!!!! of course, you knoooow, it doesn't really read so much like an ending as a Chapter 1. ::waggles eyebrow:: i encourage you in all your endeavors!! ::waves flag::

    ♥

    ps, are you really planning on making a full length epic sequel to The Sound of Dreams? haha you're prolly like ARGH, don't nag me about that!!1 so im sorry!!! just hopeful that you will. ::xoxo::
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  • From ANON - Charlie on February 20, 2008
    That was WOW!!! I really loved it.
    Please write a sequel.

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  • From spoon10488 on February 20, 2008
    that was awesome.
    I love to see a sequal.
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  • From ANON - Jaden on February 20, 2008
    Bwahaha
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  • From on February 20, 2008
    Sequel would be very hot

    PossessedMuse *_*
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  • From ANON - kittycat on February 19, 2008
    Yes, yes please write a sequel! I love all your stories, their just so HOT!!!
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  • From ANON - tysonandkai on February 19, 2008
    omg this would make a wonderful story!!!!!
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  • From on February 19, 2008
    PS:
    I may like this so much I might draw the "erotic pose" Sasuke. Just as a present :)
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  • From on February 19, 2008
    *splashes face with cold water* Whew. That was seriously one of the hottest one-shots(*cough*) I have read in awhile. I don't know, maybe it was the all beat-each-other-up-greased-ness. *claps*
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  • From LindyStar on February 19, 2008
    “Fuck,”...“We’re getting there.” Great lines, funny.


    "Fine! You want (to be) fucked so bad, I'll give it to you!" HELLZ YEAH, BITCH! Give it to him good!
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  • From charmpit on February 19, 2008
    This is going to be fun...
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2008
    (I review as I read, and this one looks like it’s gonna be looooong.)
    What’s a wife-beater in this context? ô_o . . . . Love the paragraph about his father. . . . So, was Itachi killed as well?
    Love the description of their relationship and interaction with each other. . . . I’d love to see a picture of Naruto working on the car like this. . . . Boy, Sasuke sure is a jerk in this! . . . Love the paragraph on Sasuke and want. . . . Heh, Sasuke works in a jewelry store, but is a rough guy at heart. ^_^ . . . . Love how Naruto just turned the mood once he realized there was nobody else there. . . . This twisted relationship is so cool! They’re fighting like hell, and then all of a sudden, it’s smoochie time! =) . . . . Oooooooh, ouch, Sasuke, that was mean. >.< . . . Love the bit with the parenthesis. . . . This is dizzying. . . . Love the paragraph starting with, “Deciding that he had been compliant [. . .]” . . . . (*snicker*) “The yammering libido.” So true. ^^ . . . . “The erotic pose,” I WANNA SEE!! *_* . . . . Heheh *clang* XD . . . . Interesting: in one fic, he sews pretty nicely, and in the other, he can’t sew for shit. ^^ . . . . AHAHAHA!! “What’s that doing here?” *disturbed frown* “Don’t ask. You really don’t wanna know.” YES I DO!! XDDD -- Okay, no I don’t. . . . The funny thing is the pretty music of the soundtrack I’m listening to just came on while I’m reading this. ô_ô . . . . Heh. They’re both embarrassed. . . . (*giggle*) The picture/camera dialogue. ^^ . . . . AHAHAHA!! “Let’s switch places and I’ll tell you that.” XDDD That line’s hilarious!! XDD . . . (*BLUSH*) *_* . . . . Awww, sweet. . . . Love the conflicting emotions. . . . Huh? What, is he going to drive home shirt’n’shoeless? . . . I like the dialogue, but it seems sad. . . . YAAAAAY!! He’s going to State, too! ^_^

    Very cool! =)
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  • From suzannecmc on February 19, 2008
    a sequel would be welcome:)
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  • From ANON - SD9 on February 19, 2008
    Adi,I demand you command her to get busy on that sequel.

    ...Awesome by the way, and I'm not just saying that because there was some extremely-hot-eroticly-kinky-sexy autoshop SEX (o_0)...
    ...but that did have a big roll...
    I love your writing style and I'm glad you decided to give it a happy ending with the added bonus of Naruto being a college boy (college boy Naruto is extremely hot:p).
    Hope to see more fics from you in the near future (hint hint)
    Seriously though breaks over, get on that sequel- chop!chop!
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