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Reviews for Qwiky Lube

By : Zrina
  • From LadyWolf on February 23, 2008
    OK,...YOu just GOTTA write a sequel to this...I really loved reading this....


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  • From ANON - animehead on February 23, 2008
    if adi doesn't make you, then i sure as hell will!!! god, i loved that! and as hot as it was, this was my favorite line.

    Sasuke brought a hand up to caress the strange scars on Naruto’s cheek, curious to see what they felt like when Sasuke wasn’t slamming his fist into them.

    what can i say? i'm a sucker for humor.

    i liked it.
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  • From Jien on February 22, 2008
    Waaaa!!! The ending was so cool!!! I WUV it!! Update please, let this not be the end, there's so much UST in the air!!
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  • From ANON - kellie on February 21, 2008
    please, please, please, write a sequel. This was one of the best stories I have ever read. I am begging you, write a sequel pleas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From 70SolLaen on February 21, 2008
    Since you ended the story in the manner you did, it's kinda obvious that a sequel will be demanded. I get the feeling that a lot of people are going to demand one from you. I think you should write one, either way. Great story by the way. It was quite amusing.
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  • From ANON - BelleDragon on February 21, 2008
    I love this story! Wasn't so sure about the title but a friend recommended this and I'm so glad I read it. You MUST write the sequel :-) I can't wait to see Sasuke's reaction when he sees Naruto enrolled at University XD ~ Belle
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on February 21, 2008
    ooo, I loved this. You are an excellent author please keep up the good work and I am definately up for a sequal to this...speaking of which is there still gonna b a sequal to "The Sound of Dreams?" just curious. Ok keep up the good work.
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  • From bloodstone on February 21, 2008
    *pupy dog eyes* dose it "have" to be Adi to ask for the sequel, can I ask (begg) for it...? *sloutch* Hey, can blam a girl for trying. ^___^; If you haven't knowtess, I love this one-shot! It was GREAT! I sure hope Adi asked for the sequel, cause I sure the hell want it. Please?


    ~To Adi (if you see this reivew)~
    *On hands and knees begging* Please, please, PLEASE, try and get Zrina to write the sequel...*hopeing, pleading* I will give you lots, and lots of cookes!? XD
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  • From ANON - Tastes Like Chicken on February 20, 2008
    The only thing I like better then the lemon is the ending. Classy, classy ending!
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  • From Allys on February 20, 2008
    OMG Zrina!! I hope Adi's already jumped on your case!!! Gods... LOL, Why am I always amazed when you blow me away?? I came into this knowing it would be good. Your work always is. But, heh... sometimes I think I forget exactly how good. I loved the descriptions and of course the dynamic you set up. How you described their relationship and Sasuke's doubt and just his wanting and cluelessness. I loved it, it always seems so genuine. And then just the dirtiness of it all XD. *Snicker* - Qwiky Lube XD. LOL, and Naruto's hands and job the grime and sweat and heat, I... just... Damn. *Starry eyed* I love how you write Sasuke. He's still an acerbic bastard, just with a soft fluffy centre that he'll deny to his grave. Yeah yeah there's some ice in ther, but I swear it's wrapped in fluff XD. And Naruto, always just that much more in touch with what he wants. So true. Although, *smiles slyly* Sasuke can be pretty single minded when he he finally figures it out (ala B&B XD). Gods that's so one of the things I love about your writing. The spot on-ness. And the romance of it! *Fangirls* cause at the end of the day, Naruto gets to go too. This couldn't just be a fantastic one "night" stand. No!! We have to have something to look forward to and make our little fangirl hearts beat double time XD. I love how you write!!! I love you, you're so sweet! LOL, you are my official drug dealer. Helping to supply the drugs that keep this poor body moving *huggles u* Thank you!!!! *Chuu* ♥
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  • From ANON - elochai on February 20, 2008
    huh-ha! this story is AWESOME!!!!! i would love to see a follow up. hopefully you'll get inspired someday. :)
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  • From ANON - Shosuro on February 20, 2008
    I LOVE IT!!!!
    That was a sad lovely one shot if you had left it alone and not show that Naruto was going to be able to go to college.
    On the other hand I love the way you hooked it so nicely. It makes me want to sit here at the computer and wait for the next chapter.
    I love the aggression that you show from both of them and the longing.....nice touch.

    Hope to see more from you,

    Shosuro
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  • From sweetciel on February 20, 2008
    Message to Adi: Please demand a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From noface on February 20, 2008
    SEQUEL! Must make SEQUEL. *demands* You never fail to impress when putting those two together. I love how your Naruto is so darn manly, but still Naruto. And your Sasuke, brilliant. Please make a sequel, actually, even a multi-chapter fic would do, in fact, that would be great! Love the AU and love the boys! Keep it going, more more more.

    SKS
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  • From Nikana on February 20, 2008
    oh! my precious! we are not Adi, but we plea for a sequel. You are so good at this! Are you sure you are not an undercover writer? I mean you already are a wonderful one but, aren't you someone famous under a penname? hummm! just rambling...please add at least one more chapter, just to shove Sasuke's words down his pretty troath and something else just because we are at it ^^
    master piece as usual O/_O
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