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Reviews for In beginning of memories

By : RyuuOokami
  • From Ladylara on February 26, 2008
    Wow, what could have happened to Naruto. That was a very touching moment when Sasuke went to him. I cant wait to see how the story unfolds.
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  • From ANON - animelover on February 26, 2008
    I'm not really good at offering constructive comments early in fics, so I'll just say this has a awesome start and can't wait to see what you do with it. The only question I have is why was Sakura watching Sasuke suspiciously when he carried Naruto out of the cave?

    Thanx!
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  • From ANON - kyu000 on February 25, 2008
    uuuuuuuuuuupdaaaaaaaaaaaate!!!!!! i luv, luv, luv it. good plot. and just go with watever flows. great plot. it actully reminds me of one of my storys i began to write b4.... well n-e-ways. im glad in actuall interesting story has come along. i was starting to lose my love for aff.net. please keep the story coming!! fantastic plot.
    ^.^ ill b keeping an eye out for this one. oh and my view will always be craving sasunaru. just to say. so you do watever you think keeps the story alive and easier to write about. good luck!!!!!
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  • From lupin2000 on February 25, 2008
    Really great story so far... cant wait to see where this goes... please update soon...
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  • From lexjamandme on February 25, 2008
    Interesting beginning, I am looking forward to more.
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  • From LadyLaran on February 25, 2008
    Nicely done. Shock was misspelled but I realized the word you were trying to use. I'd rather if you kept it Sasu/Naru. Sakura would be great as an older sister type of thing but not in a relationship. You going to bring Iruka in too to help take care of him?
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