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Reviews for My screwed up life

By : Gaaragirl
  • From lightningplum on February 24, 2008
    Okay, I can see you worked really hard on this. And I’ve always had problems with my fanfics involving spelling and grammar-so don't worry about it everyone does it on the first time :)!. Your story's plot needs a little tinkering and try avoid caps-lock for whole sentences. I think you should maybe not put your Oc as Gaara's daughter and what going on with this dead wife you could put some more detail in. Keep up the good work. :)
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  • From kateridemonica on February 20, 2008
    More please! Good concept you have here, keep it going!

    KaS
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