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Reviews for The Way Things Are

By : Aini
  • From drivven on February 23, 2008
    So very sweet. I'm glad I opened it. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - lonelydove on February 23, 2008
    oohhh...i just started reading this story...i likes alot..
    please update soon?? Cant wait to read the next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - Timberfox on February 23, 2008
    Thank you for another quick update on an enjoyable story. I really like the pace of the story so far. Poor Shika - he tried. I love the concept of a runaway Hinata - it makes me giggle. Usually, in arranged marriage stories, she refuses to runaway and "disrespect the clan". lol
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  • From bloodstone on February 23, 2008
    A reivew a day keeps...the story from delays...? LOL Well it kinda rimes...^___^;

    Well I can tell you one thing, this may be a filler chapp, but it sure didn't feel like it this time. Not that the last chap was bad or anything (so don't worry about that! ^__^) it just had the filler feel...So I like what you did here, you tock the same scurcomstans you had in the last chap, (basicly needing to do anther filler chap) but estated of doing it like last one, you tuck it up a noch and riped the filler chap feel, out of the feller chap! Which is GREAT!

    I am loveing watching a good auther (with is you), transforming into a great auther. Your not just getting better with each story, but with every CHAPTER of each story! Which if FANTSTICE! Everyone get better with time, your just speeding that up to HAFE, which is great! You really have talent for writing, and your really getting in tune with writting as a skill, and your own style! It tacks people years to do that, and by what I can tell you haven't been writing for that long, which is amaszing with the storys you are putting out! You are wanderfule at writing! I can't not wait for the next chapp, and see what you blow my mind away with this time! Great Work! ^___^

    *Compent on Story*
    Poor Shika. *Sigh, pat him on shouler* He did try...he just want WAY over bound. *nerives and amused laugh* Let just hope that he can just tack a step back and regroup. He is in the right area, just way off in left feil, with his approche. Like a wild bull in a glass house! LOL Not exsately the right aproch when dealling with Neji, exspaule if he is on the deffents already. *shick head* He maybe a guines on the 'war' baitlefield, but he is not s quines in the field of love. You can tell that from this chap. LOL I wander if you need to bring someone in to just to give him a little help with this? I wander who could help.... Well if you do pull someone in to help, I will just have to wait for the next chapp, and see what happens next. Great Work! I am so loveing this story! Update as soon as you can, like tommorow! LOL Great Work! ^__^
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  • From Anaheyla on February 23, 2008
    Heheh, Neji is a virgin.
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  • From charmpit on February 23, 2008
    Neji can only resist the Nara sex appeal for so long...
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  • From Twiggies on February 23, 2008
    Heheh.
    So amusing.
    Poor Neji, though.
    Well, he clearly isn't emotionless! :D ..But he is a virgin. I'm loving it.
    I've always loved the virgin Neji who always blushes when somebody talks about his (nonexistent) sex life. xD

    I love Shika too.
    Don't worry, even geniuses makes some mistakes. xDD

    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - lo on February 23, 2008
    This story just makes me grin. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From hsosborne on February 23, 2008
    OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do

    you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know?

    the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com
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  • From on February 23, 2008
    Woot! You've updated two chapters already! ^o^ I'm so happy! I really like this story, and I don't care that the women seem bitchy. In fact, I didn't find them bitchy at all. They're just being their normal self XD. Keep up the good work! Now then, how will Shikamaru handle a hurt Neji? I can't wait.
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  • From ANON - lo on February 22, 2008
    This is developing beautifully. I like where this is going and I can't wait to see what you do with this.
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  • From ANON - lo on February 22, 2008
    This is really well done. I like this simple little relationship you are creating. greatjob!
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  • From AWickedMemory on February 22, 2008
    Eee! So cute! I'm dying to read more~ I love your Shikamaru~~~ ♥♥♥
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  • From Jien on February 22, 2008
    So cool and interesting, update soon!!
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  • From Travellyr on February 22, 2008
    *giggling* Oh, Ino... Well, Ino is a little bitchy anyway, and she and Sakura together are outright catty. I liked how she kept trying to insinuate things about Neji and Shikamaru, and anyone who was getting it (and a couple people who weren't) were shooting her down.
    XD My favorite is how Shikamaru told her he'd just sit there and let her the next time she started choking.

    Saa... they're sweet, in their distant, offhand, unspoken little way. Neji and Shikamaru. And I like it very much.
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