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Reviews for Leaf Café

By : sasunaru2006
  • From LadyLaran on November 14, 2009
    I have a feeling Fugaku is worrying about heirs. Itachi can keep Kyuubi. Artificial insemination.

    *beats the crap out of Kakashi* You're going to lose Iruka if you keep running at Obito's beck and call!!!!
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  • From MiraMira on August 03, 2008
    Haha, I love this story. It makes me laugh to even think of Sasuke making himself a blond XP

    Um...please don't take this as a flame or complaint, but there are a few "their" versus "they're" and plurals versus possessives mix ups...is there any way that I could beta them for you? I'm a bit of a grammar-Nazi when it comes to things like this. Well, either way please let me know at keitaros_kero_neko at yahoo dot com or over AIM at KetarosKeroNeko

    Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (not to mention how I want to see Sasuke's jealous reaction when he eventually hears that Naruto's living with Gaara, fufufu)XD
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  • From LadyWolf on February 27, 2008
    Where Kakashi goin'?????? OOOOO is he like a hired thug for the Uchiha's! I bet that's what he is....can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Unknown Person on February 27, 2008
    Oh wow, good job for Gaara (aka Panda) for deceiving Neji. Though when Neji made his appearance, it seems out of character (I'm sorry) though you really had me fooled with the blond hair dye. I thought for sure Itachi would dye it no matter what XD but does that mean the piercing is real? But I felt so sad (but laughed) that karma got back at Panda-kun. Now, i want to know how he got that bruise and did Kakashi owe the Uchihas something? I can't hold on any longer, onegai, please update soon and your other fanfic as well
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  • From charmpit on February 27, 2008
    Cool! Sasuke in a blonde wig. *tries not to laugh out loud*

    Neji-kun is hot for Panda-kun. How long will Panda-kun be able to hold out? I love it that he is playing hard-to-get.

    So...how long before someone gets some sugar?
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  • From hisoka on February 20, 2008
    apologies are so rare like an endangered speices.i didnt really think sasuke was capable of remorse or guilt surprise surprise.hope you can update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2008
    nice job keep up the good work.I can't wait for the sex scene.stop it!(shouting at inner pervert)
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  • From ANON - Oli on February 20, 2008
    I love this, please continue.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 20, 2008
    I really like this story, but it is difficult to read. Not because of your writing, but you have a tendency to stick a person's thoughts or reactions with the other person talking.

    Like this...
    "Go to hell." Sasuke decided he was going to kill Naruto.

    But really, it was Naruto who said it, but it sounds like Sasuke.
    It should read.

    "Like Hell." (A tag here could work but if in the flow you probably don't need it."
    Sasuke decided he was going to kill Naruto.

    I hope I didn't offend you with this. Thanks, can't wait for an update.
    Slave
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  • From ANON - Unknown Person on February 17, 2008
    I truly feel like this is going to be another fantastic story. I really can't wait, I haven't read something like else better and you have really build up some tension in the first chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm going to bookmarked this fanfic.
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  • From nawatia on February 17, 2008
    OK, finished the story. I like what you did with the characters - Sasuke is a bastard - and the squealing makes me think I am bleeding from the ears (I have a very vivid imagination). Naruto is really cute, and I like how you portrayed Gaara. I am looking forward to hwat you do with the rest of the story!
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  • From ANON - Mija on February 17, 2008
    wow, interesting start, and full of mysteries..like the way its begun and eagerly await a new chapter, thank you for the read and I hope to read a new chapter soon, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From nawatia on February 17, 2008
    OK, I just got thru the first third of the first chapter and had to toss in a review - great story so far, but what is with all the squealing? My god, the squealing!
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