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Reviews for Hidden Within Your Heart

By : Lady1Monkey
  • From mls on February 26, 2008
    can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!
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  • From serenagold on February 26, 2008
    Gah! I loved Gaara's reaction!!!! He sees right through him and likes him anyway!!! X)


    Now one mystery remains.... what was Sasuke doing in the bathroom! O_O
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  • From serenagold on February 25, 2008
    In response to your comment having nothing to do with the story: Meh. Who can figure people. I think it really depends on the person. I know people who will comment on any little or big thing you do (new hat, new hair, new hair color, new shoes...) and people who will never say a damn thing. I think the later just don't comment because either A) they don't notice/care or B) don't feel its really their place to say anything. Good or bad. Of course, I suppose there is also option C) whatever you did look terrible and they're just trying to be polite and not say anything about it... but lets just disregard that idea at the moment. Heh. Either way, as long as you like whatever changes you made -- thats the important thing, right? Not that a statement like that doesn't seem like a cop-out, cause I mean c'mon, we all want to be noticed... but it is true. If they don't like it - fuck 'em! (Whatever it is, you know, since you only vaguely alluded to it.)

    In response to your story: Great chapter. I'm all excited now to see what happens when Gaara and Naruto finally cross paths. The world of this story is a tad strange, since its very AU and none of the characters are ninja, yet Naruto retains his ninja powers of transformation. I also picked up in this chapter (of course, I could be reading too much into it) that Naruto has super sensitive hearing which could possibly be a fox trait. Also, he named his "mother" Kyuubi and took the last name Kitsune... so is it possible that in this story he's still a jinchuriki?? (cheer!) And if so, is Gaara also still one and that the reason his servants fear him? This adds a level of anticipation to this already great story that makes me look extra forward to the next chapter. Of course, as I mentioned before, I could also be looking to deep into things and Naruto still just the orphaned child of noble parents (thus the reason people curse him for "lying" about his name).


    Gah! Hurry up with the next chapter! The anticipation is killing me. ^^
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  • From spoon10488 on February 25, 2008
    Garra has arrived! I can't wait to see what trouble happens next. I love this story can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From mls on February 25, 2008
    xan't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!
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  • From Jelp on February 24, 2008
    You have a very interesting story here. There's a good bit that needs to be edited grammatically, but overall a good story. ~ Jelp
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  • From Wingedmerkat on February 24, 2008
    I HAVE to have more of this story!! It is good! So very good! Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next!! *Puppy eyes* More please.
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  • From sakuyalove on February 23, 2008
    This is a really cute story, I'm enjoying it so much.
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  • From ANON - Tall Tree-san on February 23, 2008
    OMG, I just love the dream sequences you have going there! Loved the chappie too ^-^!
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  • From mls on February 23, 2008
    can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!!
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  • From LadyRonin on February 23, 2008
    i really like this story. you even managed to put sex in it an not rush them into having sex, i really like that. i have a quick question though is the dream that they are both having flashes of memeory from a past life that they had together. in their past life are they supposed to be naruto and sasuke konoha ninjas. i can't wait for the next update.
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  • From spoon10488 on February 23, 2008
    I can't wait to see what happens! I love the way Sasuke and Naruto acted together. I also love the dreams they have. Very hot!
    =)
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  • From Wingedmerkat on February 22, 2008
    Very funny!! I loved this chapter it was so cute and funny! Poor Naruto! Didn't get to eat his ramen-noodle-goodness!! Hoping for more! Love the story!
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  • From serenagold on February 20, 2008
    The best part in this is not only do Naruto's friends get to laugh at his predicament, but all of Sasuke's friends choose to share in his humiliation too at letting him dance with a boy. >:)

    This is the true joy that only occurs in real life. =^^= Keep up the great work!
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  • From spoon10488 on February 19, 2008
    That was so funny I loved it soooo much.
    I can't wait for more.
    =)
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