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Reviews for All the Small Things

By : lexjamandme
  • From basilika on March 10, 2008
    it has a really nice and warm atmosphere. ^_^ Thank you.
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  • From starprincess on March 10, 2008
    I am in love with this story. I can't wait for more chapters. Your writing style is amazing !!!!!
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  • From Vox on March 08, 2008
    *glomps!*

    Oh, I love you, I love you, I love you! You gave me my Itachi! *faints* And he was so awesome and wonderful about it, too! "I wouldn't subject the woman I love to that." *swoon*

    All right, confess! Who is our Itachi in love with? Is she adorable? Can we watch her kick ass at some point, just so we know that our Itachi is in good hands? Wait, is it a him? Just because Itachi has been bringing girls doesn't mean he's not an equal opportunist. Gah! You see what you've started?

    As always, I love your writing. You keep improving. And also as always, I adore your characterizations. I notice that I wasn't the only one to comment on the fact that seem so canon. Your creativity is excellent. Good reverses and role shifts.

    Thank you, thank you, thank-you-thank-you-thank-you for all the wonderful Itachi-centric moments. I live for them.

    Love ya!
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  • From charmpit on March 08, 2008
    This chapter was SO funny! Orochi-kin is a real winner, isn't he? Always a day late and a dollar short.

    Thanks for the long update!
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  • From Imagy on March 08, 2008
    Your updates bring me so much joy
    *sniff*
    and
    I can't wait for the twins to show up!
    I'm totally waiting on tenderhooks here...!
    I can't wait~!
    'til then, babe ^o^
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  • From on March 01, 2008
    I am lovin this story I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From roelyrodriguez1 on February 28, 2008
    okay, partner that review here didn't count,no way, no how, i'm i writing a harry/draco story! On AFF doesn't count cause we don't get much reviews here!

    So there!

    love you always,

    Roely
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on February 28, 2008
    yay! i think this was my fav chapter so far, this and the first :)

    Things i ADORED about this chapter:
    - sas teasing a wincing naruto about getting him a donut HA! loves me some smug teasing sasuke
    - the fight! i know, weird right. but i really was into the fight with them it felt real. and naru pleading with sasuke to stay at the end of it *sniffle*
    - love you for NOT ending it there as i know many other authors would :D
    - Itachi! yay! not enough of him in this one, so he was nice to see. their brotherly bonding was so... nice? lol
    - I loved how worried naruto was that he had driven sasuke away forever, i felt it for the little cutie aaawwww
    - and finally, the best part ever :'you're gonna be a mommy' I ROLLED.

    So super good, though the 'playing' thing... all it does is remind me of chucky LOL
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  • From Vox on February 28, 2008
    How many ways to say I love you?
    I can think of so many.
    How many ways to say, "Grab your torches and pitchforks!"
    if the wonderful, precious, most beloved authors
    in the entirety of the known world,
    leave us in suspense of a story for just one more bloody week?
    Only one.

    Serious note! The sex was hot, Sasuke getting hit by Itachi - twice - was hilarious, and the writing is getting better.
    One point: Itachi's characterization made me wince a little. Not much, and not for very long, but a little. I think you know the part. However, given that he was being adorable, bastard-y, and yet totally loveable Itachi all at the same time, I forgive you.

    Keep a-writin'! We love you!
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  • From roro237 on February 27, 2008
    That was impressive,incredible,funny,romantic and just WoW! Impressive because you two wrote as one beautifully. Incredible story line. I was laughing at Naruto cracks. I never get enough of the boys romancing each other. The sexyness is the WoW! ^_^
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  • From ladywolfTerri on February 27, 2008
    OMG!!! KAWAII!!!!!... I could just glomp that chapter it was so sweet and romantically cute!!
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  • From Imagy on February 27, 2008
    Have I ever mentioned what a wonderful person you really are?
    I mean seriously.
    No matter if there's more than one person out there to help crank out these chapters,
    just the fact that there are so many of them so frequently,
    makes my heart burst out with adoration for you and your "cause".
    Oh, and on a side note.
    I'm pretty sure that all of us here know that Naruto really is the mommy.
    So, I can't wait to see what happens next, babe~!
    ;D
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  • From charmpit on February 27, 2008
    You know what? Your chapter four is remarkable. I was thunderstruck. That lemon was out of this world--I haven't read anything quite like it--and that conversation between the Uchiha-pets at the hospital nearly drove me to tears. So touching! You put a lot of heart and soul into chapter four, and it shows. I am...in awe.

    So the Uchiha and the Uzumaki are going to be parents. Wow.

    I am now anxiously awaiting future chapters of this story. ^_^

    For the record, you are BRILLIANT.
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  • From LindyStar on February 24, 2008
    Ohhhh! Fabulous! I'm all with you learning medical jargon from ER, House, Scrubs and whatnot XD I also love what you've done with Itachi and Kisame; that line about Naru borrowing their paramedic jackets was so funny, I just adored that one! Anyhow, just one small thing that bothered me in chapter 3...it's exorcised with an 'o' not exercise with an 'e'; exorcise means to drive out, while exercise means *shifty eyes* what Sasuke and Naruto do between the sheets! Keep up the great fics~! Muah!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on February 24, 2008
    ... that is f'ed up man *shakes head* and they were there for so many years, thats real sad
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