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By : imadecookies
  • From Archfiend on July 03, 2008
    Oh, i can`t wait for the girls to kick some ass,preferably into a bloody pulp-well it is what Yuna and misako deserve, right?- after heraring the twa biggest idiots in the history of mankind out (They too deserve a thump on their head). Please continue with this superb stor, it makes one feel what`s going on, all those emotions are so vivid, so please continue.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on July 03, 2008
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From roxnroll on July 02, 2008
    Great job. I can't wait for those girls to get what's coming to them.
    Rox
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on July 02, 2008
    awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From ANON - yumm;> on July 02, 2008
    I like this story, I hate the fact hinata and sakura one of my favorite characters got hurt but I could feel there pain, I REALLY RESALLY HOPe that they don't go back with naruto and sasuke, I think hinata and shino and sakura and neji together for at least a little bit will be really nice, and make the boys regret what they did. otherwise good job on the story, cause right now thee isn't alot of good fanfic's of naurto out.
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  • From serenagold on July 02, 2008
    Oh man, girls can be so evil. I've known quite a few skanks in my day who live for the drama. Nothing but trouble.
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  • From Archfiend on July 02, 2008
    If it really is true what you say about writing from personal experience, then it is quite clear as why it is so detailled ad well written. I hope you write the next chapter soon, for a few more chapters of this calibre and the story will soar.
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  • From MidnightDreamsx on July 02, 2008
    First off: Thanks so much for the review! I was waiting for it for some time now. ^^
    You're story is great, the plot and everything are very creative and entertaining. I think that because you're writing from experience it makes it more realistic and fun to read. As for the InoKiba stuff, I just have to say I loved it. The pairing makes sense and I would like to see more of it. I hope you update soon, as soon as you can! Anyways, I'll shup up now... lol...
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  • From DemonicKnight on June 26, 2008
    It's not everyday a story pulls me in enough to break my heart. You, my lady, have a gift. Never stop writing.
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  • From Meinos on June 23, 2008
    Hmmm... You know what? The story is really well written, I must say. Really good. And the OCs are SO good, that...

    Well... I must say, I like Misa and Yuna much more than Sakura and Hinata. Seriously. I do. A lot more. I don't know if you like them more than Hinata and Sakura as well, but I must say that it's really hard to create such OCs.
    My biggest hope for this fic is for it to end with a NaruOC, at least. Because I like very much her characterization and how you described Naruto's reactions and feelings about her. He isn't so stupid as to screw up just because of sexual attraction his relationship with the only girl who has ever loved him. I think you should at least give it a thought, because creating good OCs in a fanfiction (especially a Naruto fanfiction, nowadays T_T) is a great thing.

    I mean, they're not bad girls. That much I can see. If they really like Naruto and Sasuke, that is. They're manipulative and seductive, yes, but if that's the case, they're nothing more but girls who do everything the can to get the guy they like. It's as simple as that. They just show some backbone. Because, seriously... Nowadays no one respect the 'taken' rule anymore. It's sad, but it's like that. I hope to see more and soon.

    Meinos Kaen

    P.S.: If you had already planned for the fic to end with Canon pairings, you could always write different finals for the story. In a chapter the canon pairings final, in the other the OC pairings final. And maybe throw in a NaruOC+SasuSaku and a NaruHina+SasuOC. Because, with the work you do with the characters' personality and behaviour, I think that the finals to look up more would be these last two, with everyone's else reactions and such.
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  • From on June 21, 2008
    Awesome fic. Besides a few grammar mistakes here and there and a few extra words, this fic totally blows my mind. Being a guy and having gone through something similar to what Naruto went through, I gotta say you portrayed it well(somewhat close to my own actions, a bit creepy but good nonetheless). Can't wait for the next chapter, got me on the end of my seat here.
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  • From ChazA4 on June 20, 2008
    I'm very surprised(and pleased, of course) that you're updating this story so quickly. I do have a couple of points to nitpick about, though:
    Last chapter, you said that we would see a) Sakura's reaction to finding out who Sasuke had slept with, and b) the sisters' true faces. Unfortunately, we have yet to see either(unless I'm not reading into the fic enough). Hopefully, those little irritations will be rectified in your next chapter.

    Other than that, please continue! This is one of my favorite Naruto fanfics of all time!
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  • From MidnightDreamsx on June 19, 2008
    Yay yay yay!!
    Thank you thank you thank you thank you!!
    You are wonderful!
    You're right about the POV change, and I'm actually glad you did it. I hope you update soon ^^
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  • From roxnroll on June 19, 2008
    That was really good. I'm glad that she found out it was Yuna.
    Rox
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  • From JasonBanks on June 19, 2008
    While the POV change was a little jarring, I'm sure we'll get used to it by the next chapter. Also, the only mistake I saw constantly was you used you're instead of your to indicate possession. Other than that, great chapter. Update soon!
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