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Reviews for Love Fool

By : UsagiKichi
  • From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2008
    This is awesome! Why can Sasuke and Hinata find each other and leave Naruto and Sakura alone!! Go Naruto!! Update soon...PLEASE!
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  • From Legacy on March 17, 2008
    I'm glad you rewrote this chapter. The original version made it seem like Naruto was not only becoming attached to there situation but being deadly obsessed. Now it seems more of a shared feeling between the two of them. I honestly thought Naruto was going to turn into a Norman Bates/Misery type obsessive boyfriend, which in turn make Sasuke the hero to protect from Sakura.

    THanks again for clearing things up with the rewrite
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  • From Ffourteen on March 16, 2008
    Still loving this, hope we see more of it. I love that Naruto and Sakura are cheating on their traditional partners.
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  • From Lunar84 on March 14, 2008
    Uh oh. Though now I'm kind of worried about Sakura being caught between two over possesive men. I have to admit I love seeing this side of both Naruto and Sasuke. At first I was worried it would be like a pairing swap with these two couples. Now I'm glad it doesn't appear that way. I'm also happy to see someone else not a fan of Hinata. I don't hate her per se but I don't really like her. And I hate Naru/Hina with a passion. All that aside, loved this chapter. It's starting to show darker elements and I luff that in fics. PLease update soon
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  • From Gnosismaster on March 14, 2008
    I really hope things go well for Naruto and Sakura.
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  • From ShimekirixnoxSeken on March 14, 2008
    Eh, Naruto does seem a little possessive, even for him. Oh well, I'm glad that it's still NaruSaku, lol.
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  • From roxnroll on March 14, 2008
    One word awesome. I'm still having a hard time getting it-I'm a little slow on the uptake. I'm still enjoying the story and I can't wait to find out more.
    Rox
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  • From Tsunamsai on March 14, 2008
    I really liked this chapter. Adding the lyrics in the middle was a nice touch, and they seemed to emphasize the scene that much more. Yamato MAY be OOC, but I'm not really sure, as he's kind of a mystery character I would think. Being blunt is how he is shown to be in the actual series though, so I think you got that part down.

    The possessive nature of Naruto, the warnings of Yamato, and Sasuke's talk with Hinata are making future chapters look absolutely great. Again, great job with the chapter.
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  • From roxnroll on March 07, 2008
    It was awesome. I can't wait to see how this progresses.
    Rox
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  • From Tsunamsai on March 06, 2008
    Another great chapter to the story. It may be short, but I think it was written well enough. And glad I could be of help.
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  • From ShimekirixnoxSeken on March 06, 2008
    Oh, this is probably the best chapter so far! Very emotional and very sweet! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Lunar84 on March 06, 2008
    Another amazing chapter! I love how you write it with the flashbacks as Sakura was lying there. It's nice to see a jealous and paranoid Sasuke. Usually it's Sakura who is unsure of herself in her relationships with him. I'm loving this approach. I'm sensing that since he is jealous and already suspicous about these two, heads will roll when he realizes what has been happening. I would not want to be Sakura.... then again if I had Naruto and Sasuke fighting over me I think I might enjoy that for a second ^_^

    I really didn't find the flashbacks confusing. The only part I had to reread to make sure was when Naruto said he loved her since they were children. At first I couldn't tell which one it was. Other than that everything else was crystal clear and perfect. It may have been a tad short, but it was written beautifully. It gave alot of info that made the story that much better.

    Looking forward to more!!!
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  • From roxnroll on February 28, 2008
    That was really good. Will you be telling how she and Naruto got together. Because they both seem semi-happy with their other relationships too. I smell disaster here. I can't wait to read about it.
    Rox
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  • From ShimekirixnoxSeken on February 28, 2008
    Emotional chapter, and writer, eh? That's good, means your really getting into this story! But, I do feel sorry for the both of them though....
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  • From Lunar84 on February 27, 2008
    Everytime I see you post a new chapter I feel like a kid in a candy store. Sad...

    Anyway wow this was an emotional chapter! You've written it so well. It's written so well in depth and detail the reader can feel these emotions that Sakura is going through. Being torn between what's right and something she desperately needs. I truly feel bad for her.

    Now she has seven days to be with him as she chooses. The problem is what if they get caught by Sasgay- err Sasuke or Hinata coming home early?
    Or perhaps Sasuke and Hinata will find their way to one another on their mission. There are so many possibilities to this wonderful story. I'm sure no matter what the outcome it will be fantastic.

    Looking forward to more!!!!!!!
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