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Reviews for Pretend for me

By : sakuyalove
  • From ifXY on May 20, 2009
    i usually don't do much narusasu but hell! this was good i have to admit it
    i like the way u captured their character! Sasuke is a bloody dumbass v all know dat >.>
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  • From ANON - blur on September 03, 2008
    Must have a sequel!!!
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  • From harus on April 22, 2008
    Extremely hot and it ended on a really sweet note.
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  • From ANON - Art on March 27, 2008
    This story is so good. A sequel would be great.
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  • From bloodyqueen on February 29, 2008
    Hey, I like your story. Hope you got more ideas.

    P.s.:if you haven't found me, my author name is darkblood. I'm sorry if you could not find me. So, hope you can forgive me.^_^
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  • From bloodyqueen on February 25, 2008
    Now thatwas the hottest thing in the world.

    You rule!! XD
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on February 21, 2008
    I really LOVED IT!! this got my mood a bit up, I was really sad just now.
    Anyway, it would have been interested if they were to meet again, but maybe that's too much, dont know... anyway It was awesome!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2008
    (I review as I read.)

    Love the very second line of the story. . . . I also love the line, “But of all the unexpected things he had done [. . .]” ^^ . . . Ahhh, so Sasuke really misses Naruto, eh? . . . Interesting character. I liked his answer to Sasuke’s question about why he’s a prostitute. “Parents died, huh?” I guess that shouldn’t be surprising in ninja countries, but it’s kind of a funny coincidence all the same. Hmmm. . . . That was funny. “Pedophile?” X) Oh, Sasuke took the picture with him when he defected after all. Cute. . . . I wonder what this guy’s voice might sound like when he’s transformed. He never knew Naruto (maybe). . . . Uh, you never really gave a description about how good the transformation was. . . . Interesting prostitute; are they allowed to be so assertive? (I wouldn’t know, I’ve never been around any.) Love the part where Sasuke freezes. . . . Is a tongue an organ? ô_o . . . Love it when he calls Sasuke “baby.” . . . I wonder how well someone can keep a Henge going while they’re having sex. . . . Ah~!!! I caught that! Sasuke never told this guy his name, did he! :D . . . . Aww man, he left? That’s sad. :( . . . Awesome ending. I really liked it. I don’t know if you should put a sequel or not; this is the kind of thing I wouldn’t be frustrated with if it was left in the open. This is the perfect material for letting the reader decide what happens next (it’s harder than one would think to make an ending like that).

    I also like your original idea. You should post that, too, as a separate fic. I’d enjoy reading it. It would be from Naruto’s POV, though, right? I’d also like to see how well Sasuke tops (if ever; according to this fic, he’s usually topped before).

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  • From snnj11220 on February 14, 2008
    I love this, especially the little twist at the end.
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  • From Raina on February 14, 2008
    Wow this was truly excellent. It was sweet, hot, smexy, and hot. I like how in control Naruto was, that just made it extra sexy. I loved it.
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  • From Mikra on February 13, 2008
    Bless your genius mind. I really liked this :)
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  • From biiisti on February 12, 2008
    I liked this a lot and i hope u update soon 'cause i wanna now what's gonna happen next between those two ^^


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  • From PieldeLava on February 12, 2008
    Great fic. Yay for Naruto and Sasuke smug. Look forward to reading your future works. Until next time, take care and god bless.
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  • From LadyWolf on February 11, 2008
    I love it!! I love it!!! Hell why does Naruto have to suffer if the teme was such a dumbass!!!


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  • From Nikana on February 11, 2008
    oh god, oh god!!!O_o please! you have to make this longer.This is the better oneshot I've read in a really long time! Its just great! Mind you not just the rabid fangirl talking here, but actually the not so rabid one eyeing a quasi plot in a nearby future...plllleaassee???(inu puppy eyes)and Sas-uke is not so brilliant, am so glad someone actually tricked him for once.
    Anyways, even if you are not up to make a long term story, this is enough to leave people gawking for a good ten min afterward the main reading
    ByE O/_O
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