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Reviews for Pretend for me

By : sakuyalove
  • From Jelp on February 11, 2008
    Aww, yay! I really hoped it'd be the real Naruto in the end, and I figured Sasuke would figure it out by Naruto calling his name. lol Sasuke should look for Naruto more often! :-) Cute fic. (And just as a side note, I was also corrected on this myself, so I figured I'd share the knowledge; the prostate isn't a bundle of nerves; it's, well, a prostate. Or a gland.) ~ Jelp
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  • From roro237 on February 11, 2008
    I liked this very much!!!!
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  • From SasUke28 on February 11, 2008
    Awesome lemon!XP! XD! I thought it made sense too about the whole Naruto pretending to look different and he probably just dropped the henge instead of actually performing one! XD!
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  • From ANON - rae on February 11, 2008
    that was nice, any chance of a sequel?
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  • From ANON - takoyaki on February 11, 2008
    great concept! i'd love to see a sequel!
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  • From spoon10488 on February 11, 2008
    I liked the way you wrote this. Naruto stalking Sasuke would have been okay, but it was better this way. I loved it.
    =)
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  • From ANON - Haru on February 11, 2008
    That was awesome~! I loved it, and Sasuke is such a moron. Go home, Sasuke! Go home and get some from Naruto XD.

    And I hope you don't listen to HPTR Fangirl unless Sasunaru is your bag. Nothing saddens me more then when people read a narusasu, comment on how they like it the other way, then ask for the revised pair ;;...
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  • From ANON - HPTR Fangirl on February 11, 2008
    Nice fic, though I can't imagine Sasuke ever bottoming for anyone, much less Naruto. But can you make a fic with Naruto as uke. By the way, love the story.
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  • From ANON - Arisa on February 11, 2008
    This was the best narusasu I've read in a looong time!! Really awesome, built up really really well and I do hope you'll give us a continuation of it...? It really (yeah, I use that word a lot, but only for good stuff xDD; ) makes you want more, want to know what happens next time they meet up! *begs for more!*
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 11, 2008
    ohhhh, now you can't just leave it there. Sasuke now has a reason to come back, or maybe Naruto could help him???? But please don't leave it there. You did have a couple of spelling mistakes. If you like, I can run through and grab them for you. Let me know NarutoKakashi@live.com
    Slave
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  • From ANON - Ivy on February 11, 2008
    Loved your story!

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  • From mls on February 11, 2008
    loved it!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Moondork on February 11, 2008
    SO GOOOOOOOOOOOD! I really liked the end and the part about the pedophile. A sequel would be very much loved.
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  • From narutovixen383 on February 11, 2008
    Awwwwww, so sad you're not making it a two-shot. I would have loved to see Sasuke chase after Naruto or something to start a relationship with each other because once you have the real thing, you can't go back! It's just not the same Sasuke! I also like the fact that at the bottom you cleared up some questions that were in my mind! I was wondering, how in the world did Naruto know where to find Sasuke and know what he did, buuuut you answered it! Mad props!
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  • From ANON - fluffy_cloud on February 11, 2008
    when i began reading this story, the voice inside my head said, 'find naruto, find naruto'. i thought it was naruto which sasuke already set his eyes on but green eyes??? what the..?! suddenly gaara's image pop-up in my head. nooo...!!! haha. ookayyy... not really fond of sasuke x gaara. ehem, anyway, i kept on reading and eventually after finished it all, i am very, extremely satisfied with the outcome. now i can smile widely till reach both my ears ^___^ hehe

    narusasu or sasunaru always!!! ^0^/
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