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Reviews for Apologies and Hope

By : Chiyo
  • From ANON - ghostraven on April 13, 2008
    pc's f*** with me.. i had written like the whole thing and then it cut me off... alright, so, again from the start!
    i think you realize who's writing, do ya? ^^ i finally had the time to read this. and it's amazing that, even though i've stopped watching naruto long ago, and don't even really know what's been going on anymore between these two brothers, the text captured me from the very start. i can't judge if you kept the chars IC, but i can say that your writing is powerful. the words flow well and build a tension on their own from the very start. i like that... i like that they just are at the right place to build a picture and atmosphere in one's head without actually reading as in "lining letters up to build words, lining words up to build a sentence"blabla. that made it possible to me to read this without problems, even though i'm not otherwise interested in the pairing or anime (except for lee and gaara). actually, it was funny... i was looking for fics with the result that i stopped with 4 of them after reading the first 2 or 3 sentences, stopped 3 more after reading the first paragraph (and those were all pairings and animes that interest me!) then i thought of coming here, and voilá, i really found something good. yes... thank you for that! do you happen to ever rp? *cough* (because i have the same problem with finding rping partners that i have with finding good fics)
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