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Reviews for ANBU, We Have a Problem

By : Hestia
  • From CrimsonEmbrace on April 08, 2008
    The ends of 4 & 5 were very poetic, mushy, lovey dovey...

    I love your stories... the sex was hot and the storyline is great. Dom/agressive Kotetsu is very interesting. Is this the last Catbowl, or are you going to do more?
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  • From ANON - Drace on March 17, 2008
    Gah?........avulxhtozfj/.....wtf?........*shakes head violently* ...oh I think my brain just melted...........anybody see my bones?...........
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  • From industrialmidnight on March 14, 2008
    Oh, holy fuck.

    Crap.

    That was good.

    So good I'm speechless.

    Wow.
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  • From Allys on March 12, 2008
    Oooh so you went back in time ne? i can deal with this *nods happily* especially if it involves the smex that they ended on last time XD *waggles eyebrows* LOL, Yes, I'm reviewing as I read this one ;).

    O.O!! Don't talk about Ibiki like that!!! Oooh :( *sniff* I know it's just cause he didn't realise and I kinda hope that he doesn't ever realise cause he'd probably feel like ten tons of shit. So it's okay I guess for him to be clueless.

    Aww so cute (him describing Kotetsu)

    *snickers* Malfunction. Does not compute. Danger Will Robinson! Danger XD :P

    Brain damage. Sever hallucinations. Dude!! didn't you hear the danger warning XD!! (God I'm a dork XD)

    Poor Shu *huggles and pets* XD Awwww!!!! *_*

    He's retarded, a fucking moron, an idiot *snickers* XD.

    The line of exclamation marks is Priceless :D.

    Shit, why did he have to fall for a slutty ho? LMAO *dies*

    Kunai out of here time for pretty XD!! I love the complete disjointedness of his thoughts. you are cracking me up XD. And oh god you're gonna kill me for all the freaking XD's but I swear I'm grinning like a freaking idiot or a bloody cheshire cat. Ah here I go again - Silly little pretty XD.

    Oh but I like you being a dick, continue on ;).

    Oh, those cute little scowls! Dammit I hate when guys do that. I am not cute when I am angry! I am Angry when I am angry!! And don't fucking smile at me XP Boge!! *snickers*. Solidarity Kotetsu!! I feel it for you. Ukes of the world Unite!!

    You are so fucking forgiven for learning how to do this *shakes head and chuckles*. You go Tetsu!!

    You know *snicker* I can think of yet another "thousand" jutsu of Kakashi's XD Taijutsu Ogi! One Thousand years of pain!!! LOL, That was the perfect name for the technique love! I bow to your brilliance!

    Nooo stop thinking bad about Ibiki!!! Maybe I do want him to feel like 10 tons of shit *grumbles*

    “Ah, pretty, I’m going to suck this pretty cock of yours till you come, and then I’m going to slick up my fingers and slip them in your ass and stretch you good and wide for my cock. You’re going to straddle me and spread your sweet asscheeks. Ah, pretty, and then you’ll press that sweet little virgin fuckhole of yours down on my big, pierced cock.” - - - *dies of blood loss*

    mantool RAWR! *waggles eyebrows* XD.

    So my pretty one, my love, my sweet pretty Kotetsu, don’t come unless you are ready for it, ready for me to love you, ready to be my beloved, my pretty little bitch. ~ O.O *blink blink* Holy shit, that's a serious fucking request. It's almost like a trap. How could he not fall right in?

    Damn dangerous... and soo fucking Hott.

    God I'm still tossing upon that verdict... To chain or not to chain... That is the fucking question.

    This is so sweet, but it still makes me sad for Ibiki. Thanks you goddess for Shika *glomps*.

    like an enraged little chibi porcupine XD *snickers* you are killing me XD.

    With a warrior’s cry, Kotetsu impaled himself on Shu’s cock. He rode Shu, not like a virgin, but like a rapist—devouring his cock, feasting on it, cursing, snarling, scratching. It was like watching a berserker in a blood lust—and he drew Shu’s blood with his nails and teeth. ~ Holy shit *runs for copius amounts of tissues*

    *And Allys tries desperately not hump her chair*

    God damn it woman!

    Oh please oh please unchain him!!! Oh PLEASE!

    Oh damn you wicked woman! ~ But then oddly, sweetly, wonderfully, his wild nasty dominating chuunin, seemed to go all dreamy, all sweet. ... His mouth fell open, and those dark eyes got this starry look, and the thrusting in his mouth slowed to an achingly slow, sensual speed. ~ That's just too hot!!

    "Undo the chain now, Tetsu" *nods fervently*

    and shatter so beautifully... *puddles*

    And oh goddess that ending *starry eyes* My brain has just overloaded. Too much. First Shika and Ibiki blew me the fuck away and then this.... My brain is about to implode! Thank you love!! Gods it's 4 in the a.m. and I have too much shit to do tomorrow, but I've never been happier to lose sleep. *huggles u to bits* Ja na!
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  • From Allys on March 12, 2008
    Holy mother of all things.... Beautiful. And lovely and just fantastical. *huggles the crap out of you* Hestia goddess of the fricking hearth and home!! You have totally lived up to your name yet again. IbikiShika ROCKS MY WORLD!!!!!!!!!! And if I could draw Ibiki for shit I so Would!!!! But I can't!! I've TRIED!!! I'll try again. That was fucking AMAZING!! *dies of ridiculously happy* The shogi game was too much. I was bursting, my head and my heart. Too many things to keep track of. And the perfect excuse for them to be so absolutely gushy in the way that makes you feel so good you feel ashamed and label it corny. How do you do this *shakes head in disbelief*. And then... just then... I have no words for what happened after. Gods, Shika is one of my all time favourite characters EVER, and your Ibiki has always had a special place in my heart. So them together... when you write them so well, like this *puddles*. I'm going to try to reform while reading Shu's problem. Gods Poor Ibiki, he's just being tossed about *sends hugs and love through Shika*
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  • From honZeldaFitz on March 10, 2008
    Yay! Shu's back. I just want to hug him. It was just as good from his pov. I especially like how you take the unknowable, faceless ANBU and give us sweet, vulnerable (badass) boys to love.

    I agree with Drivven ~ I'd love to see some Genma (and Kiba, too). Actually, I'd love for you to write one for every one of our boys and write them forever and ever and ever... XD
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  • From ANON - the_boyfriend on March 09, 2008
    hi,

    love it. I want more. Please, if it's not too much to ask. Update soon. Keep the good work. Ps: quite a dominant and possessive bitch Kotetsu is.

    Read you later
    :)
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  • From kenshinjunkie03 on March 09, 2008
    awe, now shu has his little tetsu-chan^^ this was a nice chapter indeed (i was going to say sweet, but it started off not sweet, but the end made me forget that^^;;)
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  • From DuosAngel on March 09, 2008
    My gods that was the best! I can't wait for the next chapter! I want more of Ibiki and Shika. Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Ivy on March 09, 2008
    I loved this chapter from Shu's perspective! Tetsu was so fierce ^_^ Best chapter yet!
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  • From tash1021 on March 09, 2008
    aww how romantic
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  • From llyoung on March 09, 2008
    Love the one thousand sperm jutsu and the chibi porcupine. Wonderful chapter. Wonderful dialogue and wonderful sex.
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  • From nekochannya on March 09, 2008
    I loved Shu and Tetsu's... so good... and Ibiki n Shika... that is hot... nyah!!!! Hope its not over yet!!! strong and stubborn characters are good... happy kitten!! More?
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  • From ElfenDream on March 09, 2008
    oh.. and I agree with the review over me here.. (labyrint something.) Kiba Genma would be hot! never thought of that couple, but... yeah.. that could be fucking hot..
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  • From ElfenDream on March 09, 2008
    enraged little chibi porcupine! LMAO.. so funny. and then it was oh-so-fucking-hot!!!
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