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Reviews for Violate Me

By : t69
  • From Lunar84 on February 06, 2008
    For your first time attempting to write a fic, I would like to say this is really terrific. You have talent and it shows through your writing. You actually write better than most of the authors on this site. I mean that honestly. I'm not blowing smoke up your ass either.

    You've selected a pairing that doesn't get much attention. I, personally, like Sakura with anybody as long as it is a well written fic. The story flows well and I like that you're very descriptive in your sentences. Your grammar and punctuation seem to be top notch as well. Though I know my grammar and sentence structure sucks I'm a stickler for reading a fic that is well written. I hate when I come across a story that looks as though it was slopped together in 5 seconds. If the author doesn't take the time to look it over why should I read it ya know. But, I'm getting off topic sorry ^_^

    The point I was trying to make is just by reading this fic it appears that you've taken the time and consideration to make sure your fic is up to par. It shows you care about what you do. Therefore, I will continue to look for new updates. I'm interested to see how Sakura approaches Kiba in this situation. And what his reaction will be. Hopefully a chapter of nothing but smutty smut smut ~_^

    Update when time permits please!!!!!

    -Britt
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  • From cchott1 on February 05, 2008
    Good story so far. Like the pairings and looking forward to more
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  • From roxnroll on February 05, 2008
    I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read more.
    rox
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2008
    WOW!!! Kiba is hot!! This is your first fic? I can only imagine what more "practice" will do to your skills! This is great! I can't wait for the update!!! Whew!!! Is is getting warm in here? I have to stop reading these at work.....
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  • From roxnroll on February 04, 2008
    Um- Monster canon, foot-long hard man-meat!! Priceless. Um- Do you have Kiba's number? That was hot!! I can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From dest on February 04, 2008
    great job. looking forward to more.
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  • From cchott1 on February 03, 2008
    wow, nice start. look forward to more
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  • From on February 03, 2008
    good start
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  • From dirtygirl42 on February 03, 2008
    You did a great job, first time or not, I really enjoyed reading what you posted. It was really well written and I'm sure the story will only get hotter from here. Thanks for posting and keep writing!
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