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Reviews for As We Go On

By : MissMayumi
  • From Kyubifire on February 10, 2008
    OMG!!! Now that was hilarious! U need to write a second chapter that was kickass sweet!
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on February 02, 2008
    You actually wrote a one-shot where Sasuke and Naruto love each other without writing out the lemon? O.O THE WORLD IS ENDING!
    Just kidding hun. It was cute, some warm fuzzies and lovely internal debate going on there but...,and I can't believe I'm about to say this, it could have been better (feels bad for saying so) I'd really have liked to see things from Sasuke's perspective as well, you know have him thinking about why he started dating Sakura in the first place as he's taking her aside since you got my attention with Sakura's opinion of feeling like she was being used to forget about someone Sasuke couldn't have. A little more angst on Naruto's part would have been good too. I hope I didn't upset you or make you think I didn't like this, I did, it just didn't quite measure up to your other stuff. You can smack me with a rolled up newspaper if you want.

    About suggestions on who Naruto gets to 'nurse' back to health next, you know I'm a rabid Itachi fangirl so I vote for him.
    BTW did you ever get your SuiNaru going/posted? (hey if you haven't then how about Sui being Naruto's next patient?)
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  • From spoon10488 on February 02, 2008
    Whoa! Please say there's more. Don't end it there please. I want to see what happens next. Please, please, please! This story is good.
    =)
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  • From inumoon3 on February 02, 2008
    I think you should continue this story!!! I like it too much!!!!
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  • From ringpop on February 02, 2008
    Hahahha this one was a bit milder than you others, but i still liked it : )
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  • From charmpit on February 02, 2008
    Any fic where the uber-clueless Sakura walks in on a hot-cha-cha SasuNaruSasu moment ALWAYS makes me smile ^_^.
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