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Reviews for Carry on my Wayword Son

By : Jayderaven
  • From Erizawa on February 14, 2008
    angst angst angst and I love it! The whole thing ^_^. Poor Genma, but you write his nervous breakdown so well, just perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter, it really does make you see Peaceful Waters in a different light, with the not wanting to get Sakura pregnant thing... sweet...
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  • From Revine on February 12, 2008
    Hey girl, another awesome chapter. This story pisses me off and makes me want to cry at the same time. It pisses me off because of what that bastard did to Genma, and it makes me sad that poor Genma constantly gets the shit end of the deal. I love these three stories with all of my heart. I'll be waiting for the next update on any of your stories!
    Ja Ne,
    Revine.
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  • From kateridemonica on February 12, 2008
    Hey! Awesome story you have going here! I looooovee it. Not too many people focus on developing the back story for a secondary character this much, and I must say you have gone out of your way to make it legitimate.
    Having said this, I would like to add one tiny bit of criticism, in that, at the mention on Genma's mother, you say she is an actress in Kabuki theatre, however, women are not allowed to act in Kabuki, nor any kind of Japanese theatre.
    But really, other than a slight oversight in historical information, this is a great story and I can't wait for you to continue.

    KaS
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  • From MrsCake on February 09, 2008
    Oh yeah, I definitely needed to read this to understand that last chap in Peaceful Waters. That was incredibly heartwrenching and Genma's break down could be felt intensely. Will Genma finllay find happiness with Sakura or will he be a reclamation project?
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  • From ANON - chibialichan on February 08, 2008
    wow... this fic is so deep... cant wait to find out what happens next on this sidefic and also when he finds out that sai was his son's best friend in PW... can you please email me at kairna3@yahoo.com when you update this... thankz... and keep up the great job... +^_^+
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2008
    You know...I really hate Danzou! Good one! It does answer alot of the questions PW. Excellent work! You are so talented.....
    Update soon!
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  • From Revine on February 03, 2008
    T.T You pretty much had me crying. It hurt me heart so bad for poor Genma to have to go through that. I look forward to more updates to any and all of your PW story and side stories! I love this and...ummm....hmmm if you updates soon I'll....I'll bring your favorite Naruto character to live for you to have your way with him? Lol I wish I could do that...-.- Though there's so many that I'd want. =P I look forward to updates!!!
    Revine
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  • From xXkuronekoXx on January 29, 2008
    you have such a way with words, these stories really come to life!
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  • From roxnroll on January 29, 2008
    I'm loving all of the side stories to PW. I tried reading this on FFnet but there was a problem loading the site. This was really good. It really helps clear up the story about Sai's "brother". I can't wait to read the next chapter of Undressed and PW.
    Rox
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  • From Tricia1224 on January 28, 2008
    Holy Cow! I was curious about this too. I am so glad you are writing this. I can 'feel' Genma's pain at finding these things out. I can see how important this side story is to Peaceful Waters. He is having a hard time of it. I do have one question. Are you going to go through Genma's life from this point up to the point Undressed to Kill Starts, and from there take Undressed to Kill to where Peaceful Waters begins? Anyway, these are the first Genma centered fics I have read. I love the way you have him portrayed, and the depth you are giving him. Yay you for writing such awesome stories.
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  • From BouncyBunny on January 28, 2008
    Very heartwrenching! I look forward to more!
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