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Reviews for Refraction

By : Zelha
  • From promise2003 on February 09, 2009
    I don't have time to sit down and read this all in one sitting, but I wanted to leave you a short preliminary review to tell you how much I am enjoying it. Sakura and Neji are such a sexy couple, and I like the interactions between them that you have written. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Coldstone on April 20, 2008
    Thank you for this amazing story. I liked every bit of it.

    Nice ending, an epilogue. Arigatou gozaimasu.
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  • From gaara89 on April 20, 2008
    Yay!!! I was so happy to see you updated, but almost cried when i saw it was over. Oh well! Great story and I can't wait to see more from you! Keep up the good work. I'm sure the next one will be just as good if not better than this one was.


    ja!

    ~Reigh~
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2008
    God that kast part is so karma!!! I love it!!~
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  • From gaara89 on April 13, 2008
    Sigh...Gaara...how i love him! Anyways, great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Sasuke thought.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 13, 2008
    This has to be one of the best pieces of fiction I have read in a long while! Honestly! I am absolutely amazed at your wonderful characterizations of all the characters and how canon they feel. I've never really liked or understood Neji and you've made me a fan of his. He really doesn't get enough screen time in the manga and anime. While Sakura has an ability to be paired with anyone, provided that the author works it out so that its plausible, this pairing feels utterly and completely natural. It's a sort of natural pairing when you really compare the two. Both have an inner self, Sakura has her inner Sakura and Neji has his own that he keeps hidden due to restraints of his clan. Then to have added the element of both being marked makes them closer still. Neji does have an ability to demonstrate the art of sarcasm and Sakura can hold her own which leads to great scenes of bickering. I like that they're both so alike in many ways but in turn coming from very different backgrounds. While Neji is not in the "main" branch he still from a very privileged family and Sakura is definitely someone from "middle class." I was fond of also demonstrating how different the dynamics are from the the two teams.. one regards each other as family the other more as a duty. One last thing, I love what you have done with Sasuke! Honestly too many of us make him to be this bad boy who can be reformed with the love of a woman. It's a nice change of pace (and probably more accurate?) to see him as twisted, evil, and asshole-ish as he is (but I like the whole aspect of his realizing like a sort of Inigo Montoya and the six fingered man, that after Itachi died, there was nothing left for him, he'd gone down past the point of no return and seems ready to accept fate and the repercussions of karma which is nice to see as well). Though I will say that I can see why he'd be interested in Sakura because unlike Karin she's matured (not a fangirl), she's stronger than Tsunade, and honestly (I've always felt this) more capable than Sasuke or Naruto. Being underestimated (as a ninja and a woman) really toughened her up! That's all for now.. I did think it was great to see Sasuke target Tamari and Sakura (both close to the leaders) but in that they're really what I like to think of a "feminist" type ninja were Karin is a strong ninja but very trapped in her fangirl/let me service you type way.. I am done >>;;
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  • From nekomiko17 on April 08, 2008
    OH MAN. I am so hooked. Update soon please!! :P
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  • From Goddessladybug on April 08, 2008
    I really enjoyed the story so far. The descriptions in each chapter are well done, and the plot to the storyline is well written. I hope that you will update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2008
    WHAT!!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!!!!~
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2008
    I really like this story alot loved the fast pace story yet the romance between sakura and neji took time, I can't wait for the next chapaters.
    GOOD JOB!
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  • From ANON - Ryu on April 06, 2008
    Ouch.

    No this will be interesting. A pissed off Naruto along with a propably even more pissed off Hyugga Neji and Gaara, whose Sister is also held captive by Sasuke.

    A full scale nuclear strike couldn't be worse than that.

    But Sasuke seems to be interested in important girls lately. Sakura, Temari... Seems like he wants to get hand on them, cause they are close to the leader, aka future leader of their villages. Not a gentleman behavior to say the least.


    I'm eager to read more.
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  • From gaara89 on April 06, 2008
    Yay Gaara!!!! He's here! I love Gaara!...and now that that's over...great chapters! Please update soon!
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  • From AndDown on April 04, 2008
    I must say, this has been very well thought out. Please continue with your Story!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2008
    im confused what did Sakura Kill?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 03, 2008
    omg...your story just seems to get better and better! please keep up the good work, hope you update soon!! :D
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