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Reviews for Undressed to Kill

By : Jayderaven
  • From Revine on February 03, 2008
    I -love- this story, it's so awesome. I also love that you made side stories for 'Peaceful Waters.' I was hoping to know what happened in Genma's past. This is my first time reading a story about Genma and hell I think I just may want to read -a lot- more of them. I look forward to any and all updates on your stories! Awesome job for a first time yaoi as well. =) I look forward to more!
    Revine.
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  • From gravybaby on February 03, 2008
    I personally don't like it rough but reading about someone who gets off on it is just....HAWT!
    Thats all I can really say. LOVE IT!
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  • From Tricia1224 on February 03, 2008
    That was really good and hot. Especially for your first time writing yaoi. I love the depth you are giving to the other characters too. That pretty boy has one interesting talent. I am looking forward to what the next chapter brings.
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  • From KareNeko77 on February 03, 2008
    Genma, yes, still awesome. Nice touch with some of the sounds (like the 'slap', doesn't that crack you up in real life LOL?) and the hummer...really loooking forward to the implied peril. More peril please!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 03, 2008
    Wow, for a virgin, you did very well!!! Okay, just kidding... but it was awesome!!! I think I speak for everyone here when I say... write more, write more!!
    Slave
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  • From Tricia1224 on January 27, 2008
    I am loving this story. Genma, amazing. He is a ninja after all, and I guess with that he could very well control that. I am wondering how much of his background story he is making up, training wise.
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  • From Pomona on January 26, 2008
    That's dark.
    And great. Convincing enough even if the drugs are made up, the story is nicely detailed and oh-so-spicy ^__^
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  • From Tricia1224 on January 26, 2008
    Damn! That is all I have to say about Genma's scene.
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  • From KareNeko77 on January 26, 2008
    Wow. Very believably written. Genma. Wow.
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  • From honZeldaFitz on January 25, 2008
    Nice start. I like your characterization of Genma so far. I adore him, and I love that you've given him depth and a fairly complicated personality here. I like 'Peaceful Waters' and this looks like it will be an interesting read. :)
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  • From Tricia1224 on January 25, 2008
    This is really interesting so far. I have been curious about what happened to him before the start of Peaceful Waters. I would like to know a little more about his tattoo.
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  • From KareNeko77 on January 25, 2008
    I adore Genma, so any story about him has my attention. This story sounds like it will have some meat to it, and it's intriguing already! Seamless writing and good pace. Looking forward to it very much.
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