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Reviews for Lost in the Forest of Lust

By : DarthValgaav
  • From Firebullet19 on May 23, 2008
    this was good for part two you have the do Shion from the fourth movie also so at the end it should be one big chapter with all the girls.
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  • From PerfectionistWithADD on May 22, 2008
    I really like this story and finally decided to register so I could review it. I have an idea for Isabari. Since she transformed fully, and Ino had no comments about her being any different, I can only make the assumption that she changed back to her 'half-fish' form. I think while she is on the boat, she and Naruto should find out how she did that, and sooner or later she will be able to change back and forth between her forms. Tsunade will only confirm that nothing is wrong with her and it seems she developed her abilities to the level of a kekkai genkai. Her branch of the Uzumaki family will probably all have forms of animals or 'fish' they can transform into at will. Oh well, later.
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  • From HentaiFox64 on May 21, 2008
    Personally, I believe she should be cured. I mean I know naruto will not think any different of her if she stayed like that. But in a village like konoha they will most likely already hate her for being associated with naruto. But living there looking like that will only make it worse for the poor girl. In her former village she could at least escape to the sea and simply forget every thing for a while. But she would not be able to find such a sanctuary in konoha except at home with naruto and his other wives. she'd be restricted to almost always staying at home because of the cruelty and ignorance of the villages. Besides she's already traveling all the way to konoha in hope for a cure. It would be pretty cruel to deny her a chance for a normal(well mostly)life in her new village.
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  • From Chronostorm on May 21, 2008
    Well this should be interesting as for wether Tsunade succeeds or not don't really care that much but i am wonder will you includ Shion in part 2 from the shippuuden movie
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  • From DragonMan220 on May 21, 2008
    I think Isabari looks cute with her 'monster form' but if she had the ability to switch between that and her human form easily it would be better. I'm sure the other girls will like her!
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  • From Coldstone on May 21, 2008
    I think Tsunade shall Succeed, but Isaribi can retain her ability to transform. Only the outer Markings should vanish ^^.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on May 21, 2008
    Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one.



    Tsunade succeed with a cure
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  • From Leaprechaun1 on May 21, 2008
    I think you should make it so that she can look normal, how she is and the full transformation. Like Human, Half-Human/Half-Fish, Fish-thingy. That sounds good to me.
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  • From on May 21, 2008
    So second last chapter huh although we never did find out what happened to that red headed girl from the last chapter. You kind of forgot to mention if she chose to go with him or not, and like I said with so many girls he needs a bigger place to live plus money could be tight depending on how big and how much the other wives can chip in too.

    As for her being cured well you could always do a partial one, maybe most of the scales can be removed so she could at least go out in public but given that kind of genetic manipulation with no way to know what her base was before being altered I can't see Tsunade knowing exactly how to turn her back. So she could most likely get a bit more human but I doubt she ever got totally cured.

    So next is the last one huh, well I hope you end it with a bang and I got four words for you. Mass Shadow Clone Orgy, just to keep all the girls nice and happy.

    As for the next story I know you don't like Sakura but if it's in the time skip era then can you please add her then? I mean you have to admit she actually grew up during that time and stopped being a weak girl who always had to be saved and turned into a real ninja with super human strength and can actually fight and is extremely useful member with her medical skills. Plus she became good friends with Naruto as well losing her bithcy old attitude. Just asking you think about it I know you don't like young Sakura and I can't blame you for that before the Chunin Exams she was, but as she grew up she becomes a likable character.

    Just think about it without any personal prejudices that's all I ask.
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  • From CryoBlaze on May 21, 2008
    I say to let Tsunade succeed in curing Isaribi (although maybe have it were Isaribi is still able to breathe underwater).
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  • From PositiveBlondMan on May 16, 2008
    This story is so captivating. The plot is so unique and the backup is awesome.

    The Votes Follow:

    Yes Sasame should join the harem because you can never have enough partners, women, concubine etc.

    I do think Isaribi should join the harem.


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  • From jfitzgerald236 on May 15, 2008
    Please update again soon. Thanks.
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  • From lonewolf3317 on May 15, 2008
    i like the sasami idea.by the way keep writing its a very good Fic.its get a lot of smut,yet in some ways its very tasteful too.keep up the good work
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  • From jfitzgerald236 on May 13, 2008
    I think sasame and isarabi should both join the harem. Please update again soon. THanks.
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  • From shadowfiredragon on May 13, 2008
    love the story so far and i say yes to adding both girls

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