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Reviews for Lost in the Forest of Lust

By : DarthValgaav
  • From pureblood05 on January 26, 2008
    this was ok, i just would've liked to have a naruto/temari scene, u could easily have a continuation for the rest of this exam, even before the second part ends. I'm just partial for nar/tem and would like to see a good scene with them. Pretty good.
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  • From takun on January 26, 2008
    It's an excellent story, really, and I can't wait to see the future chapters of it. If it's a case of pitching's, I guess I gotta cast my vote for my fav kunoichi, Anko, but that's just me.
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  • From on January 24, 2008
    UPDATE DAMN IT
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  • From on January 24, 2008
    I love the Bi temari, howz about Naruto meets Ino?
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  • From on January 24, 2008
    for a first story of this kind this was actually pretty good, you got decent reasoning with why it happened, good descriptions and actions. You got great spelling which is a plus and you got some plot in there as well so over all this is a very good start and I can't wait to see who the other girls will be and what happens next as well. Plus I have to wonder if there will be any changes to the history with this happening too.
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  • From chaos666 on January 24, 2008
    Not a bad start, hope to see more soon. I second the motion of adding Yugito Nii (however you spell her name). I know this may sound strange but have Kin be the alpha female (she's a bad girl and bad girls love to be dominate) and don't kill her if you include the invasion part. Finally have some sasuke bashing. Hope you update soon.
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  • From serenagold on January 24, 2008
    haha.. this was highly entertaining. =^^= The plot was about as deep and believable as a porno, but it was really fun to read and now I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

    Naruto gets lost and gets it on with every kunoichi he comes across. Kick ass. :D
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  • From zero12789 on January 23, 2008
    a little fast , but none the less interesting. cant wait to see who naruto gets next.
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  • From Mangafreak on January 23, 2008
    i loved the first chapter. i can tell this is going to be an awesome story. can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From on January 23, 2008
    LOVE IT UPDATE SOON OR ELSE
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  • From killjoevolume1 on January 23, 2008
    This isn't 1/2 bad, and it has room to expand, for your first lemon, it wasn't too bad, better than what I could do, but if your going to continue the story and make it lemon eccentric, I'd recommend adding more details to it, like describing body parts and maybe add a *pant or a *Kueww, or sound effects, and add some inner thoughts rather than completly 3rd person, then again, I'm one to talk, but still...please continue
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  • From Chronostorm on January 23, 2008
    Well i am not sure if you wanted adults in this but you could do anko also with Hinata since kinda submissive you have a dom/sub thing with her you could also put Yugito in the exams for the heck of it as well
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  • From JasonBanks on January 23, 2008
    Interesting story. If you run it through spell check, it'll be perfect. Can't wait to see the next part.
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  • From Jin on January 23, 2008
    For your first lemon this is really good. This story has a lot of potential and I'm looking forward to seeing more. Update soon!
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  • From DragonMan220 on January 23, 2008
    Pretty good idea. I can't wait to see Naruto with the other girls, the only thing I'd like to suggest adding is a female Kyuubi to end it all who helps make Naruto the new king of the Forest and he takes all the girls for himself. I can totally see Naruto ruling the forest with all the girls as his pets clad in animal skin clothes like native americans or cavemen.
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