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Reviews for Lost in the Forest of Lust

By : DarthValgaav
  • From Aaronleach45123 on January 29, 2008
    Great Story Update Soon please.
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  • From serenagold on January 29, 2008
    My only suggestion is that if you do decide to do a yuri coupling, let one of them be a transgendered Naruto in his girl form. ^^

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From DragonMan220 on January 29, 2008
    I'd still like to see a female Kyuubi. Lucky Naruto, dating Hinata and two girls who want to have hot sex with him. Thank goodness for Shadow Clones!
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  • From IvanDaShadow on January 29, 2008
    Great chapter. I normally don't like Hinata and I still don't but this was a great chapter none the less. The girl I most want to see is Ino.
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  • From sarge on January 29, 2008
    please make the next naruto ino and sakura another threesome please
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 28, 2008
    I love your second chapter dude, it was... (dang for once I'm lost for words)so the next one is Anko huh? Cool, snake bondage with a red chakra pumped up Naruto maybe? Heck I would love to see Hinata, Naruto and Anko involved in a scene together. Anyway keep up the great work of our favorite kyuubi brat and the beautiful konuchi of Konoha!
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  • From on January 28, 2008
    Please have Ino in the next chapters!
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  • From modoken on January 28, 2008
    Good story, and this chapter paves the way for a future Naru/hina sequel. I vote for Ino to show up.
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  • From shinemiru on January 28, 2008
    Great chapter! Can't wait for Ino's turn
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  • From mrse7en00 on January 28, 2008
    you have to let me kno when you you update so i can read more keep going
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  • From JasonBanks on January 28, 2008
    Interesting. My only critique is that you left out a few words. Proofread and it'll be perfect! Update soon!
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  • From on January 28, 2008
    chapter 2

    That was pretty good there, showing how they were after it. It was kind of weird how Hinata left the building and Naruto was already there given how long it takes to get there but for the sake of the story I'll let it slid. Although now you got a problem with Naruto, since you stated that he won't have sex with Temari and Tenten since he's with Hinata so having sex with another person is going to be very problematic for the plot.

    Given that if he cheats on her he'll feel like crap after it.

    Also I hope there is a part where he finally gets Sakura, maybe during the fights she notices all the girls looking at him and stuff. Hell that could lead to a threesome with her and Ino and Naruto in a way if you can get the Ino/Sakura rivarly going, you know those two will not let the other be outdone so that could be very fun later on.

    Plus at least Naruto has a few things going for him, first his abnormal stamina and another major point to make sure he can pleasure all the ladies, shadow clones. Hell I know Tenten would love having two clones already to take her in the ass and pussy at the same time. Might be her favorite position even.
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  • From Jin on January 28, 2008
    Naruto can't be serious about not banging Tenten and Temari again. Besides, I doubt the two of them are about to let that happen. Nice work overall. Update soon!
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  • From chrisdz on January 28, 2008
    nice looking forward to the next chapter, also u should throw in Ino and Kurenei though i do hope this story continues after the whole forest of death thing
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  • From firelordeg on January 26, 2008
    this is great please update soon
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