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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From lara5170 on September 08, 2015
    I really enjoyed this, it being the 1st story of yours that wasn't a 1 shot. Thank you for writing & posting. There were so many parts that had me laughing and at 1 point I almost had coffee coming out my nose, I can't even recall the last time something like that happened.
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  • From ANON - Mocca on November 21, 2014
    This is awesome . Not too long story, buuuut with good plot. very refreshing , i'm very captived by your story . thanks for the good story. Altough there are some wrong words. But that's okay . Still amazing for me.
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  • From ANON - Asira on July 06, 2013
    Lay me on my back…” Naruto moaned. “That way I have a better chance of drowning when I throw up.”

    Omg my favorite line of any story I've seen! Awesome job....love the humor in this fic.
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  • From wikedsinn on May 03, 2013
    Delightful. Itachi is a maniacal boss in this one!
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  • From ANON - kourtney on April 16, 2013
    ok i just have to say rereading this for the billionth time I'm cracking up. that being said i recently have been reading 50 shades of grey and i noticed when i was that the two mains send emails back and forth in a style very similar to yours. this made me giggle for the longest time and made me come back to your lovely stories.
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  • From ANON - DrivvenWrinth on October 27, 2012
    I had forgotten just how fantastic this story was. I love your Itachi and the emails are genius. Glad I came back to read it. :D
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  • From Demoninmysoul on October 23, 2011
    I loved it!!! The whole bit of frustrating, lovestruck, aggressive, lemonless wonder!!! I was on the edge of my chair for the most part of the story, and I loved the story, the way Itachi and the lovebirds were created. I got so into the story, a stayed up at night just to read till the end... of a chapter... - damn, it was long, but I'm happy with it, 'cause it was just great!
    I was laughing really hard at some situations (like in the end, before Sasuke and Naruto got to sleep together) and hurray for killing Orochimaru!

    So I just wanted to say, I'm all for sequel too!!! Thanks!!!
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  • From ANON - alex on September 10, 2011
    i absolutely love how you incorporated the whole "my body just moved" scene into your story... your are AMAZING!!!!!! and in an au no less... nice, very nice :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2011
    you are one of my all-time favourite naruto-fandom authors.
    just wanted to say thank you for sharing your stories with us;
    you are an amazing and extremely talented author.
    always really enjoy reading this story -- it's definitely my favourite :-)

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  • From loveusender on October 06, 2010
    WOW!!16 chapters full of win! I LOVED it, seriously. I love the bitter rivalry between them, then the lost and how they made it through the trajedy.
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  • From ANON - kp on September 21, 2010
    Ok I know you finished the story already!but...I just finished chapter 6 and I have to say I love how you made Itachi really really really! He reminds me of House...duckies!!!!! My pregnat sister has been in the hospital since yesterday with an infection and I can't get to her...she told me to read it would make me happy and you did thank u!
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  • From bloodshound on September 08, 2010
    hillarious... welll written... who would a thought Oro would be after Naruto, what a twist.
    Dammit, why is this a fan fic that can't be published... *bookmarks this story cause i can't fave it.
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  • From Prism0467 on March 07, 2010
    You know you blew us all away with this story--the buildup, the resolution, everything. If there is one thing you do well, it's plot out a story. You are just as good at writing what you've written, at making the story come alive.

    I'm not a Sasuke x Naruto fan. It has nothing to do with anything other than the fact that I don't like Sasuke and never did. However, I love Naruto, and I love fanfiction. Between those two, I will read Sasuke x Naruto fanfiction all day long. Good fanfiction is good fanfiction.

    You have provided me with countless hours of that to read. You've made my participation in the fandom so much more enjoyable than it would have been had I not come across your phenomenal body of work. I thank you for each and every moment.

    You've got a great future as an author if you're going that way. I wish you the very, very best.
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  • From NarutoVixin on December 27, 2009
    im really glad i read that and ill be looking into some of your other works thank you
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  • From RyuuOokami on October 28, 2009
    Just finished reading this (AGAIN). I find myself always coming back to re-read your stories and I always feel terrible that I don't review enough, but I'm not good at explaining what I think about stuff and english is a hard language. >.>
    You write truly beautifully. Both your way of writing, how you write the characters and how you bring forth the plot. And all those things you manage to come back to making the whole story go in those amazing circles in circles. Like how you mention Itachi's wedding ring in the very beginning of the story but then we doesn't get to know anything more until several chapters later. And how Sasuke's mantra makes such a big difference to the feeling of the whole story. *smile*
    I'm somehow amazed that I get the chance of reading your stories and at the same time I'm so damn jealous because I wish I could do what you do.
    You write Sasuke and Naruto so nicely together. The way they rub each other. And I adore you for being able to write Naruto bottom without making him less equal to Sasuke. Overall you just have a way with the Naruto-characters that makes them amazing personalities and very enjoyable.

    I could quote so much from this story because there are just too many things I like but I'll settle for just one this time:
    Sasuke looked at his mother and blanched, her black eyes had narrowed and turned cold. Suddenly, before he could stop it, his mouth opened, “He hit me first!” To his undying horror he had even pointed his finger childishly at the dobe.
    This made me laugh that I lost my breath and actually felt tears in my eyes. Just thought you wanted to know. *grin*

    And is it just me or is there something between Sakura and Kiba in this story? *snicker* Probably just my imagination and I just find it fascinating because I never see them together but in this story I just felt a spark there, that something could come up between them. *laugh*

    And; one thing I don't get... Wasn't Sasuke's apartment blown up? *confused* So how could Naruto and Sasuke end up there later? What did I miss?

    Oh there's so much I could say but I'll stop my ramblings in a foreign language here. ^^ And I'll re-read you other stories soonish and will keep watch over your profile in case of something new as usual.
    You're one of the best SasuNaru-writers out there and I always enjoy your work very much, even if I'm bad at expressing it. Thank you for writing and sharing those stories.

    //your stalker ;D
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