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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From dirtygirl42 on May 12, 2008
    Oh how I adore(d) this story! You're such a great writer - I love your fics because the lemons are just as fantastic as the plots. Please indulge your faithful readers with an epilogue - we'd love it and most of us probably read any and everything you write anyway. Thanks for another great story!
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  • From ANON - Anassa Thalassa on May 12, 2008
    Amazing. Absolutely amazing...As I have said before one of the best fan fictions I have ever read...and I don't want it to end!!!!
    If you decide to do an epilogue I am sure everyone will love you forever!!! :)
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  • From emmzZ on May 12, 2008
    HELL YES!! i'D READ THE REVIEW i'D HONESTLY READ ANYTHING YOU WRITE. sO HERE IS ONE VOTE FOR THE REVIEW AND I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THE CHAPPY! Anyway i gotta scoot laters.
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  • From mrk33 on May 12, 2008
    Love it, loved it, loved it,a dn Itachi plays the loving protector of his family
    to a capital "T". Kudos to Sasuke and Naruto. Looking forward to the Epilogue.
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  • From Infek on May 12, 2008
    I am so relieved that all turns well in the end! And Itachi is just too sweet with his children.

    Thank you for this great story and you can be certain that I would read an epilogue if you would write one.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on May 12, 2008
    rhetorical question MUCH??!! OF COURSE we would read it! I heart this ending but def more more more is always welcomed :D

    Is this my fav chapter?? its so hard to decide, this whole entire story was just fantastic. There are so so SOO many thing i could say but none could really express how impressed and utterly blown away i have been by this story. One of my all time favourites and i'm sad to see it go, but i loved how this chapter was all warm and snuggly, hot an steamin (demanding uke yay!) an it was so cute how naruto felt like the 'king of the world' following the switch up intheir 'merger' GAH! i love you *glomps* lol I'm just gonna stop now before i type anymore off key sentiments lmao

    Bravo. go ahead.. give yourself a little pat on the back :)
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  • From ANON - Charlie on May 12, 2008
    HELL YA I WANT TO READ THE EPILOGUE!!!
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  • From ANON - Charlie on May 12, 2008
    You have a very unique way of writing that I absolutely love. I have so many favorite part in this story that I know I will be reading again and again. I love how you used those cute nicknames (especially Itachi's), the email or text back & forth, Itachi's sadistic personality, Fugaku as a loving parent, & Kakashi's love & devotion for Naruto.

    My favorite characters in the story are Itachi, Kakashi and Fugaku. The reason behind that is that they are so very different from what I usually read. They're actually interesting. Most of the time I want to read more about them than about Naruto & Sasuke.

    Every time I see that there's an update I always think of Itachi. I really love the way his character is in this story. You make him so hot and sexy. I was wondering if you could write a story about him. I would specially love an ItaNaru or Ita/Kyu story.


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  • From LadyRonin on May 12, 2008
    it is always sad to see the ending of one of your stories, but i hope that it also means that you will be writing another blazing one soon. as always if you write it i will read it (and in my case probably reread it over and over and over again) i am sick that way. and can't wait to see the epilogue as well as next chapter of atst. your fan for life.
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  • From Halskr on May 12, 2008
    This is definately a favorite. This story is quite good and leaves almost no questions at the end; however, it is so well written, I want an epilogue to be able to read more. There were many things going for this story from the mix of emotions to its complex plot. The best part of this story is the text messages and emails between Sasuke/Naruto and Itachi. It comes off as being something real people would do; and yet, it manages to keep the three in character as much as possible. It is very nice to break up anger and hurt feelings with some brevity. I wish more authors would do it. Too many of these stories wallow to much in the tensions between the characters without giving the reader a break from all the mental anguish. Your story was, quite simple put, fun to read while still portraying drama and suspense. Its like one of those good novels that you pick up and three or four hours later it is finished and you wonder where the time went. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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  • From despairs on May 12, 2008
    Oh i left off the part where Kakashi and Iruka were trying to have an intimate moment
    and Sasuke went “Hands above the sheets!!” LOL major giggles. Oh and i forgot to tell
    you Tequila is my drink of choice. Of all the liquors you could've picked...*grins*

    ok i'm gone again...

    *whispers epilogue, epilogue on the way out*
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  • From ANON - nay on May 12, 2008
    Goodness, I haven't even read the last chap and i'm crying already.., I don't want it to end.., I don't want a happily-ever-after shits! i want to keep reading the after and after and after.., this story has become part of my life now, and you just take half of my sould when you decided to end it.., I can't believe i'm this sad right now..,

    You darling, are so brilliant! too brilliant that I make you are my new God, your fics are my bible and YAOI my religion..,

    so please please please, don't ever EVER EVER STOP writing..,

    your devotee...,
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  • From Kimra on May 12, 2008
    I loved this story... if you want to write an epilogue you go right ahead... though I honestly think you could finish it here nad the story wouldn't suffer for it! :D Thank you for putting so much time and energy into writing something so awesome.
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  • From despairs on May 12, 2008
    'As I said at the beginning, I do have an epilogue planned, but the question is… Would you read it?'

    My answer: Yes,in a heartbeat.

    I'm so happy that Orochimaru is finally gone and can no longer hurt Naruto, Sasuke or any of their loved ones.
    I'm sad to see this end and i would absolutely love to read an epilogue for it. I have so many favorite lines
    in chapter 15...the emails were very humorous as always. The way Sasuke and Naruto basically locked themselves
    in the apartment and proceeded to have sex/make love on every possible surface lol. And i noticed that although
    Naruto appeared grumpy about all the Uchiha jerseys, he wore them every chance he got :P I loved it. And the part
    where Sasuke told Naruto that he would not let him ‘pursue other possibilities’ and not let him go *sigh* that was
    mega sweet...gotta love the Uchiha possessiveness eh. Okay i could go on and on but i'll stop now. And i really hope
    you do write an epilogue for this. I'm sure it will be brilliant..but then i've come to expect that from you anyways
    and you never disappoint your readers.

    ♥♥
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on May 12, 2008
    awwww!!!!!! epilogue good! want. please?
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