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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From despairs on May 31, 2008
    Blah, I messed up my original review for this so i'll try again, sorry :(

    The Epilogue was everything i hoped it would be and then some. Thank you for writing one!
    I will be sure to keep a sharp eye out on any oneshots you may do for this in the future.
    Until then i will keep reading All The Small Things. I admire your writing SO much!


    As for the Manga *sigh* I really cannot say that i didnt see it coming. I mean Sasuke has
    been all about the revenge and only revenge for so long now. But yet at the same time i'm
    so freakin disappointed/depressed that he wont be friends with Naruto anytime soon, if ever.
    I mean if he plans on destroying the Leaf Village there is no way possible that they can be
    friends again right? *feels like crying* Naruto needs all the help he can get right now.
    Ugh, I find myself disliking Madara almost as much as i do Orochimaru. He really does need
    to stop letting people manipulate him so much. I'm still not quite over the fact that they
    killed off Jiraiya's character...i'm in denial though, until i see an actual body i refuse
    to believe that he's gone. He may have been a pervert but he was still really cool :P Okay
    i'm off to pout some more about the recent manga..i was really hoping he would ditch Karin
    at least :/ I REALLY hate her character.
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  • From roro237 on May 31, 2008
    You're right! When Sasuke started listening to Madara I seen the writting on the wall anew tunnel was set in front on him. Without him even knowing both sides of the story Again! If that's a genius thank goodness there's not many of them around the village:) I belly laughed at Naruto telling Sasuke he says the same thing in the bedroom and conference room. That was a good one!! I'm looking forward to the next installment of "All the Small Things". The cliffie over there was!WoW! ^_^
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  • From alleycat88 on May 31, 2008
    That was an AWESOME story!!! Funny, angsty, sexy, and breathtaking all rolled into one! You are an artist. Thank you so much for posting this story!
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  • From getd0rky on May 31, 2008
    You

    Are

    God

    That's all there is to it. I intend to worship you for all eternity for the greatness you've just bestowed to the world.
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  • From ANON - Carla on May 31, 2008
    Poor Itachi. At least he got his revenge in the end.
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  • From ANON - Nibiki on May 31, 2008
    WOOHOO! I absolutely love how you portrayed Itachi in this story. I absolutely LOVE this FIC!!! I'm so looking forward to the rest of "All Small Things" and any other fics (one-shots or multichapters) that you have coming up. Keep up the OUTSTANDING writing. Ja!
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  • From Halskr on May 31, 2008
    Well thanks for the epilogue. I really love this story. Itachi is what makes the whole thing work, and yes I am disappointed in the manga right now. When is that boy going to look underneath the underneath or however that saying goes. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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  • From charmpit on May 31, 2008
    I love you Michelle. You rock.
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  • From Jelp on May 31, 2008
    MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I LOVE IT!!! :-) So, so good.

    I really liked the idea of turning the nickname from duckies to rabbits too. :-)

    I also really liked how Itachi had a picture of Naruto and Sasuke and his kids. Even though he's evil, it's nice to know he still loves his family. ^_^

    I would love to read any oneshots branching off of this story, as I'm sure many others will love to read as well! Thanks for the fun read. ~ Jelp
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  • From Nanaka on May 31, 2008
    OMG.. ‘Oh, hello, Mr Madara, sir… yes, just go ahead and manipulate my every action… I don’t remember the last time I thought on my own.’... hahaha, i practically said the same thing when talking about the latest chapter with some friends. God, right now I just wanna beat Sasuke over the head till he gets a clue. Madara's sory had a huge contradiction in it that makes me wonder just how much of it was even true.

    Oh and I loved this story, it is without a doubt one of my all time favorite stories.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on May 31, 2008
    awww! kawaii! and funny and i don't want it to end :( one shots over the years would be sooo cool!
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  • From naylezkiesqy on May 31, 2008
    oh God,thank you for sharing the same thought on Sasuke.., he's the best example of an extremely thin line between genius and idiocy! *hate sasuke with all my might*
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  • From ANON - Lane on May 28, 2008
    WOuld we read it? What a question. You write it, we read it! That's the way things go.
    And it also keeps us up till midnight... 6 hours of seleep aren't enought damn it!
    Oh well, I think I'll deal...
    It was worth it -sadistic grin-
    Seriously, your story was awesome. What with the evil Devil Itachi, the bunnies, emails, smex, texts, and angst, it had me wavering between rabid fangirl, rolling on the floor with laughter, and almost crying because of the angst.
    And okay, I may be exagerating, but it was really that good.
    I would LOVE an epilogue.
    XD Lane
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  • From Leeana69 on May 26, 2008
    EPILOGUE!!!! DAMN YOOOOUUUUU!!!!! XOOOOOOOO

    :(
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  • From nyge98 on May 22, 2008
    I would read anything you write. I truly love this story and I am really sad its going to be over soon. I hope the story continues.
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