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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From despairs on January 22, 2008
    “I think someone needs to tell those two boys that foreplay doesn’t have to be that painful…”

    HAHAHA! Best line ever...go Kakashi.
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  • From ANON - Mija on January 22, 2008
    omg, this story is starting off very good, I soo cant wait to read the second chapter and the new ones to come, but I wanted to just say, since I didnt get a chance to last night...I spent 2 days staying up till like 4am in the morning reading "For the Love of his son" You wrote that right?? I LOVEDDDD IT!...it was soo diffrent and although some might think the charactors a bit OOC I thought it was unigue and diffrent and I enjoyed it immensly I couldnt stop reading it, but I only had so much time and I had to break up the reading in half, well sort of I read to chapter 6 the first night then the last chappies last night till 4am...I loved it and it made me cry and want to rip people apart and think the impossible, which althought I loved your title, should of been named the IMPOSSIBLE, since it seemed to be the most used word in the story lol, but it was fantastic and I have a feeling this is going to be just a good, cant wait, much huggles and thanks for both awesome reads, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on January 22, 2008
    Oh GOD you're gonna kill me with this one, it's hilarious! I had to wait for 30 minutes after finishing it to be able to write a coherent review and even now I'm still giggling a bit. I didn't miss the way Naruto has rain issues and I'm looking forward to Sasuke worming the story out of Naruto. The e-mails to Itachi, especially Naruto's, had me dying of laughter. I absolutely can not wait for your update, well I can but under protest. As a side note, how's the dragon egg doing? Hatched yet?
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  • From ANON - hln12 on January 22, 2008
    I love sadistic Itachi.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 20, 2008
    Is this a one-shot? Good it was so funny! Please write more chapters to this!
    update!
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  • From Jelp on January 20, 2008
    LOL! This story is hysterical. :-) Quite a different flavor from your last fic, and I really enjoy it. I really love how Sasuke actually launched himself over the conference table at Naruto as well. I also kinda feel bad for Sasuke's team. I think I would much rather be on Naruto's team than Sasuke's, though personality wise I guess Sasuke's team would be loyal to him.

    I can't wait to see how you'll pull the two of them together, and I really can't wait to see how Naruto's and Sasuke's teams will react if/when they begin to be civilized to each other.

    I don't know if anyone mentioned this in previous reviews, but Might Guy is actually Maito Gai in the anime/manga. I know in the original translations they had Guy intead of Gai, and I know that that's what it's supposed to loosely translate to into English, but the Japanese version is Maito Gai. Keep up the good work, and update again soon! ~ Jelp
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on January 19, 2008
    hey, mel brooks shout out! :) Hope you dont mind random internet girls telling you they love you lol caaauuse here we gooo!! I LOOOVE you and this story! there were so many specially good parts that i cant even remember all of them to quote but just know i was impressed. Hope there is more of this coming, off to check if you have other stories on par with this one :)
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  • From LindyStar on January 19, 2008
    Wow, this is an amazing intro! I love it already! Good writing and great setup, can't wait for more!
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  • From Qiana on January 19, 2008
    Please update this it is so good
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  • From ANON - kanaro on January 19, 2008
    Ha ha ha! Excellent start! I like the whole 'our side vs. yours' thing, but I would have thought you'd trade Lee and Gaara since Lee is just as energetic as Naruto ans Gaara as stoic as Sasuke. (I can't really picture Gaara playing musical chaits or Lee calmly watching them 'enjoy their youth' without joining in or at the very least commenting on it).
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  • From noit on January 18, 2008
    Itachi is a genius?! (OK....he's evil).
    It would be great to see both Sasuke and Naruto in that whatever teambuilding activity.
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on January 18, 2008
    Hahahahahahahaha!

    Ri: *looking down on T.W.* She's been on the floor for the past five minutes and has been laughing the entire time. I think it's safe to say she liked it.

    T.W.: *claws up from the floor, to the keyboard still laughing* God that was GREAT! I absolutely can't wait to see what happens. I love they way you have a sadistic but not totally evil Itachi in this. Good job hun!
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  • From Imagy on January 18, 2008
    wowzers,
    I love it!
    The first chapter was so hilarious
    I was practically ROFLing throughout the whole thing
    please, update soon~!
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  • From ANON - BennyPeace on January 18, 2008
    haha this sounds wonderful.
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  • From DesperadoSweetie on January 18, 2008
    Ahh this is going to be a fun story I can already tell. I love Naruto and Sasuke they are just to funny. I like how they both get under each others skin and just rub the wrong way and antagonize each other.

    Great 1st chapter and I'm looking forward to your next update.
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