Click Here!

Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From love2bug63670 on January 22, 2008
    This is great, I was LMAO. I'll be watching for the next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - narutoandsasuke on January 22, 2008
    omg!!!!!! your already on another story!!!!!!!!!hizazah!!!!!!! i love ur stories for the love of his son was absolutely amazing!!!!!!!! the way u protraeyed them was awesome!!!!! I ALSO LOVE THE DIFFERENCE IN THIS STORY FROM THE LAST ONE!!!!!!! NO MORE LOVEY DOVEY STUFF THE REALLY HARDCORE SMUTT!!!! (squeel) !!!!! ^.^ keep up the good work and update fast!!!!
    Report Review

  • From nyge98 on January 22, 2008
    I love this story. I have never laughed so hard in my life. Please write again soon.
    Report Review

  • From Jelp on January 22, 2008
    To: Excellent Authoress
    From: Laughing Hysterically
    Subject: GREAT CHAPTER!

    LOL! Kakashi set up Naruto. HAHAHAHAHA. Poor Naruto. :-) I don't feel so bad for Sasuke. Poor Naruto (again). I guess Sasuke will be intrigued to find out that his parents died in a car crash on a rainy day, and that Naruto's father was (my guess anyway) some sort of corporate genius.

    I really love the e-mails and the different personality inflictions you put into them.

    Sincerly,
    Jelp
    Fellow Authoress, AdultFanfiction.net
    Report Review

  • From Pomona on January 22, 2008
    OH MY GOD! That's so funny! I love your style ^__^

    Simply fantastic. I'll be impatiently waiting for more =)
    Report Review

  • From LadyLaran on January 22, 2008
    OMG!! I loved 'SOn" and now a new story! Yay! I couldn't stop giggling through these chapters. Itachi is Damien or something for doing this. And now Gai knows Naruto!! Too funny!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - NiChee on January 22, 2008
    ok...now u got me curious! pls update soon!
    Report Review

  • From bluegenjutsu on January 22, 2008
    Great story!!! It's so funny how they fight all the time but Sasuke seems protective of Naruto not getting seriously harmed. Thanks for sharing this new story! :)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Meadhbh on January 22, 2008
    Oh god. Oh, damn, this is genius. I am cackling a great deal like a madwoman right now, and desperately enjoying the boys' pain. OF COURSE Gai would know Naruto, because that's just the way Naruto's luck likes to work out, isn't it? Such lovely, lovely mayhem there is going to be!
    On a side note, I discovered 'For the Love of His Son' last week and more or less devoured it whole. I didn't review, because I am lazy and just generally somewhat useless, but I thought I would let you know that I adored it, and was absolutely delighted when I saw you'd started to write something else for these two. Please update soon, and I'll be waiting with the rest of your fan legion to see what comes up next!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - isa_7 on January 22, 2008
    Cute nickname for Naruto.
    It really suits him.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SerenityJade on January 22, 2008
    this story is awesome!!

    I look forward to the next chapter coming out!!



    Report Review

  • From tash1021 on January 22, 2008
    LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
    oh god i can picture it
    GAI: the youthfully sunshine has finally come *hold naruto in a strangling bear-hug while tear flow freely down his face and a dramatic sunset takes place in the back round**
    XD lol
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kuronue on January 22, 2008
    Writing: B+. It could use some cleaning up here and there (it looks a bit first-drafty), but it's otherwise solid.
    Story: A+. I'm in love. I can't wait to see where it goes.
    Characters: A+. Mwahaha! Oh god, too funny! No, really, honestly, I read your 'e-mails' out loud to my friend, and he just started rolling. I won't say that they're in-character or out of it, because they aren't meant to be, and you can tell. I think you've taken the core that was them, made it hilarious (V!) and gave it to us in this entirely insane and adorable format.
    Favorite Parts So Far: The e-mails and Naruto's stay with Kakashi and Iruka.
    Overall Whee Factor: A++. More now? More now!
    Report Review

  • From KoibitoFemme on January 22, 2008
    OMG you are hilarious! It took me an hour to read this chapter not because I am slow reader but because I re read half the story like 3 times. I especially liked the emails. So who was kissing who? Was it Gaara and Neji? And lawd that was so funny at the end well actually the entire story was funny. I feel so sorry for the victims of Itachi's happiness. Please update soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Emmz on January 22, 2008
    O.M.G! THIS IS FREAKEN HILARIOUS. Loving it, absolutely freaken love it!! PLEASE upload as soon as you can. I can't wiat to find out what happens next. ahahahaha is that you sunshine? I like it. anyway i think should shut upnow bye! :)
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!