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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From MidnightsKeeper on January 27, 2008
    this story wins at life. i think you are my new favorite writer. i also have no clue how i managed to miss this. twice! but, i'm happy i've found it now. i think it's going to be funny and really cute. i love love love how you write those two.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on January 27, 2008
    read this yesterday but at the end i was so 'nnoooooo need more story! rrraaarrr!' i decided not to review and annoy you lol Ready to give a more sensible review now.

    LOVED naruto's interaction with his 'parents' papa and sunshine aww too cute

    Iruka and kakashi's back story and how ruka was insulted when kak said he should leave him... so SWEEETTTT

    aahhhmmmm oh! 'the littlest uchiha' that gave me a few good chuckles

    the emails.. HA! esp sasuke's to itachi, short and way to the point lol

    theeeennn a little bit of inter office interaction hhmmm who shall it be?? my guess? ah, gaaraneji?? i don't know , random guess as 1 seemed kind of talkative more like kiba... y dont i jus wait an see lol

    Finally the sasuke passing naru bc he didnt want to drive like a granny LMAO too funny, and everything behold that was total win

    Wont bore u anymore, u wrote the story u know what's in it lol
    Eagerly awaiting the next chapter
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  • From ANON - animelover on January 26, 2008
    OMG!!! This was an absolute RIOT!!!!! Fics like these are the reason I luv this site; I mean, I was laughing so hard my cat ran screeching from the room. especially the part with the e-mails. Tears are still in my eyes .. and the spring of youth thing? PRICELESS!!!

    I'm not sure when this was updated last (the memory is the first thing to go), but if you have an update e-mail list, please add me. I've just GOT TO SEE how this turns out. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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  • From DragonsDancers on January 26, 2008
    SOOO FUNNY CANT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CH
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  • From Aquafina on January 24, 2008
    GAWD! I love those fics where I read something and I just laugh out loud bc I can't contain the amazingness of the story. And then the people next to me look at me like I'm some kinda psycho moron wannabe mind ninja. Thank you for writing a story that has further alienated me from my race! And I mean that in a good way. Its frikkin hilarious, clearly and well written, and has a good plot. Hard to find my good author, hard to find.
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  • From ANON - eowyncat on January 24, 2008
    This has to be one of the most hilarious fanfics I've read (and I've read quite a few). Dude, you are fucking awesome. So thank you. =P
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  • From CassandraIncognito on January 23, 2008
    This is honestly the most fucking hilarious thing I have ever read. Please do continue! Your wit is a refreshing burst in this otherwise dry and boring world. I freakin' adore you!
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  • From ANON - Late_Sleeper on January 23, 2008
    Dear God who rule the world of the insane and gayness,
    i love your story. i love the way you make a kakairu (which by the way is my not so favorite pairing)and reading that pairing here makes it less traumatizing to me and i'm beginning to love the pairing...well at least on this fic.
    i also adore your naruto...a very cute naruto...can i rape him?
    i also like sasuke...err...actually i hate the fucking bastard but i'm an avid fan of sasunaru...so maybe i might have a somewhat have feelings of endearment for the bastard... i mean sasuke, deep down in my coal black heart…or i’m just really that insane…
    yeah, all i want to say is that i love this fic and please do update quickly so that this little stupid mind of mine would have something to ponder on…
    sorry for the rumbling…

    another spawn from hell,
    Late_Sleeper
    MD by morning, rapist by night

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  • From digiditz on January 23, 2008
    Geez. I'm your official Internet Stalker and I didn't catch your new story until chapter two. I should hand in my title.

    Anyways, enough creepy stalkerness, this story has so much promise! I might have even started to like Itachi... ~thinks about it~ Nah! Uchiha's are definitely not my thing. But I do appreciate evil, especially clever family directed evil.
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  • From ANON - darkmousy on January 22, 2008
    i loved, loved, loved the ending of the 2nd chapter! XD and am looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 22, 2008
    hahaha, of course Naruto would know Gai from beforehand.... his life sucks!
    update!
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  • From LindyStar on January 22, 2008
    I love you for this, truly love you. The e-mail interludes are so well done. I love how you put the twist on Gai, making Naruto use the term 'Green Beast' as a scary nickname rather than what Gai calls himself (if I'm interpreting this correctly XD)
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  • From wpriest696 on January 22, 2008
    I just recently joined AFF and read all of your "For the Love of His Son" and really enjoyed. I've now fallen in love with story. It's clever and hilarious. I really can't wait to read your next chapter. I'm trying to start Beta-ing, so if you need one, I'd be happy to oblige, especially for a story as awesome as this one. Waiting as patiently as I can for your next chapter!
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  • From Imagy on January 22, 2008
    SUNSHINE~!
    hilarious babe!
    can't wait to see what happens next ^o^
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  • From spoon10488 on January 22, 2008
    I'm so so happy that you are continuing this story. It's so happy. I love it. Can't wait for more!
    =)
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