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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From Imagy on January 27, 2008
    LAWL
    "growing up"
    I love that
    XD

    can't wait to see what happens next ^.^
    later, babe~!
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  • From ANON - Hilary on January 27, 2008
    I would just like to say that this is probably one of the best AU stories I have ever read... besides your first story. It is just a great fresh idea that I haven't really seen! Have you ever thought of doing the "before" story of this story. Chibi Naru growing up with Kakashi and Iruka is just so cute, I would love to see that story as well. Anyway, great chapter! Keep up the good work!
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  • From wpriest696 on January 27, 2008
    Yet again another, dare I say I say it,...AWESOME chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Oh, and "Purging Your Life" (I apologize if I screwed up the title) was brilliant. I'll be sitting at my laptop waiting for your next chapter.
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  • From NecroAngel13 on January 27, 2008
    OMG! I could not stop laughing. This is an awesome story. Love it! Must update religiously!
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  • From spoon10488 on January 27, 2008
    I loved this chapter. Guy is so evil! So crazy youthful, but we love him for it... well at least we stand him. ;P
    I can't wait for more I love this story.
    =)
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  • From ANON - animelover on January 27, 2008
    dang, that was a fast update, and you didn't even need to be bribed! and it was just as hilarious as the last chapter .. especially the flashback where naru met gai. could i have the name and phone number of your muse, 'cause this stuff is just off the hook! ;-)

    thanx for sharing and see you soon!
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  • From MissMayumi on January 27, 2008
    Hehe, I loved Chapter 3! The part where Naruto was asking for sugar and cherries and ramen was too cute, and I wanted to glomp him so bad.

    Also, the part where both teams were standing there and a tumbleweed blew by. Haha, I about snorted the water I was drinking out of my nose. I couldn't stop laughing.

    Anywho, update soon, please! =]
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on January 27, 2008
    I prepared myself this time so I'm not out of breath from laughter, just a little lightheaded. But there were a couple of squishy moments! Yay! All I can say about Naruto's first interaction with Gai is "Poor sunshine *snicker*" but I do feel sorry for the chibi Naruto. And the exceutives cheating on their sheets? BAD EXECS BAD *shakes finger at executives* GO Naruto you tell 'em honey *hands Naruto Green Beast repellent* And Sasuke getting interested in Naruto's past gives me both the giggles and the warm fuzzies. Wonderful chapter.
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  • From gaara89 on January 27, 2008
    Please update this soon! It's funny and sweet and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From LadyLaran on January 27, 2008
    This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see what else is going to happen. Seems like poor Naruto is the only 'live one' in the whole group!!!
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  • From Jelp on January 27, 2008
    Awww, poor traumatized Naruto. I hope Gai kinda realizes what's going on, and he helps get them get together to make up for scarring Naruto's childhood memories. But still, I loved how Sasuke was immediately defensive of Naruto when asked why Naruto was also VP. "Because he's the best." GREAT line. :-) So cute, and it made Sasuke think. I think it's very in-character because Sasuke would say something like that in the manga. I think he would say to Naruto that he's a loser, but praise him to others.

    I feel so bad for both boys. Sasuke's a prick, but I still love him. :-) And I'm guessing there's a side thing going on with Neji (since he got the e-mail) and, hmm Gaara? It's usually Neji and Gaara, but I wouldn't be surprised if you made a different pairing. Keep up the good work. Update again soon! ~ Jelp
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  • From Vox on January 27, 2008
    Oh, I love you, I love you, I love you! I wake up after a hellish night to discover my absolute most favorite story in the world updated and begging me to read it. I actually woke my brother up, I was laughing so hard.

    I love the story. I love bastard-Sasuke, and the way you made him childish and petty. I love mature Naruto, but then, I love baka-Naruto, too. I'm really interested to see where this is going, and, as is now typical, I am armed with a pitchfork and torch and awaiting the next chapter... eagerly.
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  • From digiditz on January 27, 2008
    This story cannot unravel fast enough. I feel very sorry for young Naruto. A sick child should not be exposed to Gai-sensei. Don't get me wrong, I think Gai is awesome, but I know that if I came in contact with him on a day i didn't feel well I'd probably kick his ass.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on January 27, 2008
    update! smooches! haven't read it yet but its almost 4 here so i know i'll be hella tired after i read it and will have no internet access for a week soooo review ya then! :D
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  • From ANON - Halskr on January 27, 2008
    I laughed so hard when I read this story. The part about the emails in chapter 2 was incredible funny. This story is fun to read. Thanks for sharing.
    Halskr
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