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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From ANON - Liszt on February 01, 2008
    This. Is.
    SOGOOD.

    Generally I make it a point of avoiding AU's like the plague, but I couldn't resist a harmeless peek into The Dematerialized Zone when I first read the summary, and found it very much well written, containing just the right amount of humor to make a good story happen, and with hints of something more to the author than just wanting to get the central characters together, then jumping the both of them into each other's bed (not necessarily in that order). How I hate that - that in order to find good, heart-warming, mind-blowing, very much thought out, well-written and with the author taking responsibility for a full study of the mind and ideas behind the character stories in the fanfiction area, we have to come across, and sometimes look into, sad excuses of empty twelve yearsold ideas of a world centered around (bad, since it's something one of such age cannot fully comprehend as a simple fact of life that should - does - offer insights into a complex character's mind and existence) smut travestited as literature.

    I have absolutely fallen in love with this story. Your writting, your portrayal of the characters' personality, not to mention all those little things one gets in-between the lines. I *adore* it all. Your plotline - so convincing. Even your sense of humor adapts perfectly to your very unique writting style. This story is refreshing, easy-flowing, bittersweet and yet light, and no less deep in it's AU status.

    Thank you for giving us this. Please do not discontinue it until all is finished. I plan on devouring everything that comes your way from now on, and very much happily antecipate it all.

    Also... may I request that you put your amazing skills of soulfully writting the characters that one just cannot help but see the characters turned into deep, humanized, living creatures into stories that follow the plotline of the anime/manga? I'd really like to see what you could come up with to get Sasuke and Naruto together from where they are right now, mangaverse-wise.

    Would you? Will you? And thank you once again. I really enjoyed reading your work.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 01, 2008
    AH! They were doing so well. I had forgotten that Sasuke asked info on Naruto... the teme
    update!
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  • From ANON - Carla_7 on February 01, 2008
    Write more of those emails. I think they're funny, especially the one's for Itachi.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 01, 2008
    I really enjoyed this story so far. You have a wonderful feeling for your characters and you make me laugh every time, scaring the dog to death. Can't wait for more!
    Slave
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  • From ANON - j.s on February 01, 2008
    love da story...just as much as i loved da other one 'for da love of his son'
    update soon please

    p.s: 'sunshine'= pure genius, best naruto nickname ever!
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  • From Jelp on February 01, 2008
    Yeah, I think I would agree with Sasuke that he is an f-ing jerk. Man, he really knows how to screw things up. I feel really bad for Naruto, having Sasuke see his birth parents before him. How sad. I was almost crying there at the end, I felt so bad for Naruto.

    As always, I look forward to your next update! ~ Jelp
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  • From spoon10488 on February 01, 2008
    Awwwwe bad Sasuke, bad! Poor Naru-chan. I loved this chapter. I like at the beginning where Itachi is like he should be doing something 'president-y'. It was funny.
    Can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From digiditz on February 01, 2008
    I knew that info was going to bite Sasuke in the ass. I am ever so please to be right.

    I hope that something "wonderful" happens to Itachi by the end of this baby.
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on January 31, 2008
    I'm baaaack *looks around* no new chapter? *pouts* ah well it hasnt even been a week yet so i'll chill :) Review!: love love love chibi naruto and kakshi and iruka as his parents struggling through college with him *sniff sniff* so beautiful! In the springtime of their youthful love! ROFL!

    Sasuke and naruto's interaction continues to be wonderful (he plays the chello?! O_o) and the end part where i just know sas couldnt sleep because he was feeling guilty about earlier and naruto talking to him made him feel better aaawww (er or something similar. hey i DID read this almost a wk ago lol :D)
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  • From nyge98 on January 31, 2008
    I LOVE THIS STORY. I have never laughed so hard in my life. I love those emails Naruto sent to Kakashi. Please write soon
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  • From ANON - Pundit on January 28, 2008
    This is brillaint. I've laughed out loud about 5 times per chapter (I'm not even going to try to count how many times I smiled). I LOVE your use of Gai in this fic. It's absolutely inspired. Also, I'm very curious as to who is getting it on over Sasuke's emails. Neji? Itachi? I honestly don't know. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for posting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2008
    Thanks for the update.
    I like how you added some flashbacks about the family.
    I can just imagine how traumatizing it is to have Gai as a babysitter.
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  • From DragonsDancers on January 28, 2008
    cant wait tell the next ch
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 27, 2008
    Good chapter. I like the flashbacks to when Naruto was 5. He was so cute!
    update
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  • From ultistarmon on January 27, 2008
    OMFG!!! This story is a laugh riot!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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