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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From Imagy on February 06, 2008
    what a wonderfully youthful chapter~!
    so full of spring time happiness and joy~!

    but seriously
    loved the 'my body moved on its own' line
    its so much fun to see people incorperate that into thier stories
    and your development of the characters--so delicious! ;D
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  • From PieldeLava on February 05, 2008
    Great fic. I really enjoy reading it. One of the best AU I read so far. Look forward to the next chapter. Until next time, take care and god bless.
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  • From YamiKaeko on February 05, 2008
    OMFG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I laughed so hard when Naruto asked if he thought Itachi was the Devil and Sasuke replied that he was indeed. Hahahaha and the last reply from Itachi priceless!! hahahah PLEASE update soon.
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  • From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on February 04, 2008
    i love this story. really. the emails - the best, i crack up every time i read them. i am so copying this story to my desktop, so i can read it over and over. hehe!
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  • From spoon10488 on February 04, 2008
    awwwwwwwe! I loved it! It was so sweet.
    I loved the part where sasuke said
    “… body… just moved… on its own.”
    Can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on February 04, 2008
    They're gonna wake up holding hands! get ready for it... aaaaawwwwwww :) :) :D I was clapping like a retard ha! at the end of this chapter. muuuch better than last chapter's ending that i couldnt even review (ggrrr stupid sas leaving that out where naruto might see, stupid naruto looking through other ppls things). As usual i adore whenever naru talks to his parents, they are so close its ridiculously sweet :) And OF COURSE i just knew someone was gonna get injured on that mountain thingy, so glad they're back on even BETTER terms at this chapters end, i was worried it was gonna drag on forever before they made up.

    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Billy on February 04, 2008
    I LOVE ITACHI!!!
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  • From ANON - Hige on February 04, 2008
    Hey xD

    I was really surprised when i found out you're the writer of 'For the love of his son'... gah Dx i was ignorant, slow and stupid.. but yeah am very happy to be given a chance to read your works again ^.^

    Your Fanfics never fail to brighten my dull and boring day... scratch that... dull and boring life...

    Anyway, Great fic yey! the writing style was different from your previous fic but it was as good ^.^ change is always nice :D and the fact that the plot is as interesting makes it even better. xD

    I love the way you wrote their emails... ahaha and OMG I laughed so hard whenever i read their reply to their so called boss xD oh and don't forget the award (‘World’s #1 Boss… assuming everyone else is dead’) you rock!!

    So i'd always be around checking your works and stuff and I know am not a very active reviewer but always remember that every time you write a SasuNaru fic, you make someone happy, somewhere in this sad world (namely the girl infront of this computer xD)

    Go ahead and write more!... err I mean... yey!

    Luff Luff and more Luff!
    Thanks for writing ^.^ update soon ^.^

    PS. SasuNaru is Love... DUH... ahaha ROFL


    Another PS. YOU ROCK!





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  • From ANON - Mirayuki on February 04, 2008
    Awwwwwwwwweeeeeeeee, so sweet!!
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  • From ANON - Pundit on February 04, 2008
    Uuuuugh. I can't believe you made him say "my body moved on it's own". So cliche! That being said, it made me cackle. You're decision to use the main yaoi line in the canon story aside, I absolutely love this fic. It's brilliant and the characterizations/dialog are spot on. I also adore how you had Gaara show his displeasure to Neji and reveled to the readers that the two are an item. Inspired. Basically, this entire story is brilliant. And I've never liked Itachi so much before. "My silly little Minion" Brilliant. Oh Lord, I'm gushing. I should stop before I go teeny-bopper on your ass and scar you for life. Much Love!
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  • From nyge98 on February 04, 2008
    The last part was so cute. I absolute love this story. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mija on February 04, 2008
    ooh this is just getting better and better, love the whole email thingy, love the way Naruto writes to Itachi and Itachi taking it all in stride and even going with it lol, again this fic is just as good if not better than the other one I read....*God I hope that was your fic, I am tired, could be wrong* anyhow loving this fic alot and it made me cry a few times, love the interaction between Naru and Kakashi...would of thought Naru to have been given to Iruka but to Kakashi and Kaka calling him sunshine? priceless, love the whole green beast truama thing was laughing my ever loving butt off...anyhow love it, cant wait to read more and please please please add me to your mailing list please? Thank you thank you thank you, cant wait for more...huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
    Mmija711@wmconnect.com
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  • From LadyRonin on February 04, 2008
    this was a really great chapter. i like reading your stories because they always have this reacuring something that is always hilarious. in for the love of his son (which i have reread three times since completion) it was inner sasuke and in this story it's the emails for me (they crack me up). i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Halskr on February 04, 2008
    Thanks for the update. This story is just incredibly funny. I really like the e-mails between Itachi and the other two.
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  • From digiditz on February 03, 2008
    Damn. This story just cannot unravel fast enough. But I don't want to rush it because I'll be sad when it's over.
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