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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From LadyLaran on February 09, 2008
    Can Naruto not catch a break?! UPDATE!! What happened?!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on February 09, 2008
    No. Oh NO YOU DIDNT! Considering naruto and his parents interaction imy second fav thing about this story... aahh So hating you right now! *pouts* But even though i knew something was coming at the end i still looooved that kiss YAY!! though it so fell out of nowhere lol, i was like 'wait a sec WHAT did i just read about LIPS TOUCHING?!!' haha good times. Also glad it doesn't seem like the duckies got fired, and 4 ppl were missing?? hmmm wonder who the other 2 cd be.

    So you LEAVE IRUKA AND KAKASHI ALONE and all will be well in the world even if sauke hugging and comforting naruto at the end was soo OMG aawww inducing
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 09, 2008
    Ohhh, I was so happy you added another chapter.... I guess what they say is true, Keep your pitchforks close and your dragon slaying swords even closer!

    Okay, so the appropriate reply to that ending is... what, what what??? What the fuck??? What happened to Kakashi and Iruka???

    Ohhh, don't leave us hanging.
    Slave
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  • From Jelp on February 09, 2008
    Ack! I was all like, Hahahaha! Such a funny chapter, especially with Sasuke telling Itachi to leave his duckies alone (hilarious!), and then O.o Wow! Those boys sure move fast, to NO! It better not be Iruka and Kakashi! And then, I got to thinking, is Naruto talking about Iruka and Kakashi, or is he talking about Minato and Kushina? I really hope nothing happened to Iruka and/or Kakashi. ::sigh:: Looking forward to the next update to figure out what's going on! ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - lo on February 09, 2008
    Ohhh drama. Nice work I can wait to see what happens next. I love the way you write.
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  • From charmpit on February 09, 2008
    OMG what happened to KakaIru?

    Please update again soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Pundit on February 09, 2008
    Cliffhangers are evil. Thought you should know...
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  • From Gingitsune32 on February 09, 2008
    Argh!!!! Cliffhanger!!!! I love Itachi!!! LOL Duckies? LOL I love that!!!! :D
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  • From LadyRonin on February 09, 2008
    now i know hy you needed fluffy (can i say evul authoress of cliffy doom). now i know why itaci is so sadistically cooly evil. ican't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mija on February 09, 2008
    ooooh my GAWD! you soooooooooo cant leaving hanging like THAT!....what happened??? his parents as in Kakashi and Iruka or his bio parents??? oh man you are killing me you know that??? but alas tis nothing I can do..*and not cause of your dragon* Dragons love me, have them all over my house they are my pets...anyhow I unlike my pitch fork wielding co fans, shall not chase you down with a pitch fork, it does not good to pressure an author to write something, when you do that you get crappy chapters, so I leave you to your creative juices, buuuuuuuuttttt ifn you take too long, I do have this nifty cast iron frying pan I can dig out of my cupboards...not for you mind ya, but if my charms dont work on the dragon then I would have to sadly use it to konk fluffy on da head so that I could convince you of your great need to update this wonderful fic that you have me salivating and laughing and yanking my hair out at...all kidding aside, twas and is a wonderful fic and the last chapter was the best...what the heck did Itachi DO to the duckies??? and awwww Sasu cares for his duckies toooo...and you soo have to love the emails those two send, specially Naru's omg they crack me up...till next chapter, which I hope is soon, be well safe and happy, thanks for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From Kimra on February 09, 2008
    what a mean place to stop the story... *sigh* I await updates.
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  • From NiChee on February 09, 2008
    i can't stop laughing about the "duckies" thing. rofl

    wonder what happened to kakashi and iruka? i hope u didn't kill them!

    update soon k?
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  • From spoon10488 on February 09, 2008
    Oh No! What's going on! Evil cliffy! Naruto's parents? Iruka and Kakashi or his birth parents? I need to know more!

    I loved this chapter. Glad Naruto and Sasuke are getting closer.
    =)
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  • From ANON - Hilary on February 09, 2008
    One word: EVIL! I love your stories really I do, but why must you attack the only family Naruto has...?! Uh I would keep Fluffy ready for pitch forks! But I really loved this chapter, despite the huge cliffy. The way you write Itachi is very interesting. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From gaara89 on February 09, 2008
    OMG! What happened? Nooo you can't do that! Please write more soon!!!
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